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We were told since we were young to be nice to others, respect those who are older than you, help each other, not steal etc. We have been brainwashed since we were born so society can stay peaceful. Some of us either were not thoroughly brainwashed or they found out they were exploited, so they rebel when they have a chance and in some cases, they are punished severely such as imprisonment.

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Is this for an assignment?
No. Everyone on this forum who has been checking my writings know I write whatever I like. Emotion: smile Why does it sound like an assignment?
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There's a few stylistic things I would change but it's definitely a functional statement. I wonder if you have ever seen the movie American Zeitgeist?
Could you tell me what those changes would be?

No. I haven't heard of it. It is good?
We were told, when since we were young, to be nice to others, to respect those who are older than you, help each other, not to steal etc. We have been brainwashed since we were born so society can stay peaceful. Some people of us either were not thoroughly brainwashed or they found out they were exploited, so they rebel when they have a chance and in some cases, they are punished severely with things such as imprisonment.
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There aren't any real errors but I'd change a couple of things.
New2grammarWe've were told been taught ever since we were young to be nice to others, to respect those who are older than you us, to help each other, to not steal, etc. We have been are brainwashed since we were born birth so society can stay remain peaceful. Some of us though were have either not thoroughly been completely brainwashed or they found out have discovered they were exploited, so they rebel when they have a chance and in some cases, they are punished severely such as including imprisonment.
I think that formulating stronger arguements is more important than proper grammar at this stage. http://www.zeitgeistmovie.com / ... This film may make you angry and upset. If you've ever wished to free your mind from the confines of accepted "reality" then I'd definately suggest you watch it. If you are content in the cell that most of us share, ignore me and continue your studies.