Hi,

Please correct & modify my letter below.

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Hi,

Please let me know about my contract extension, I know its ending in October. But I want to know about chances of extension, so that I can plan. I am sorry, I am asking this question early this time. Based on contract period, either I need to give notice or renew my apartment lease next week.

Please let me know.

Thanks
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Request: If possible please add few lines based on your ideas.
You can use 'Hi' and 'Thanks', etc if your friendliness with the person responsible permits such casualness, but in general when inquiring about a business matter, something like this is more appropriate:

Dear Mr/Ms (last name),
My contract ends in October, and I am concerned about whether it will be extended, because I must either give notice or renew my apartment lease next week. Would it be possible to advise me on this matter at this time?
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,
Hi..As an employer, how should i write a letter, to extend my employee's contract.

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Hi,

I wanna write a letter to my manager regarding my contract extention. Can you correct me if I am wrong somewhere.

Dear Sarah,

My 6 month contract with Ranbaxy is going to end on Thursday, 14th July. It would be great if you could put in an entention for another 6 months. Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sincerely

P.S.