Woud somebody please comments my English?

Regards,

Fizzi

A: I am going home now. Just to let you know that I have locked the door there. By the way, how is your family?

B: Everybody is good. The baby is excellent. We are moving to a new house in 2 weeks time.

A: Oh really? It is a hard job especially with the arrival of a new baby!

B: Yes that is right. But, the house that I renting at the moment has been sold last couple of months. The new owner would like to make some renovation. So that, I need to move.

A: Have you found the new house? I think it is hard to rent a house especially during this time of the year when students are going to start their new semester. Majority of the houses are booked by them.

B: That’s make me really scare! Luckily, one of my friends is going home to our country for good. The owner of his house has offered me to replace her. Without waiting much longer, I accepted the offer.

A: Where is the new house?

B: It is not far from here, I think it is about 4 kilometres from here.
Woud somebody please comment on my English?

A: I am going home now. Just to let you know that I have locked the door there (where? at home?). By the way, how is your family?

B: Everybody is good. The baby is excellent (not appropriate word choice. Fine/doing well are possible options, among others). We are moving to a new house in 2 week's time.

A: Oh really? That is a hard job, especially with a new baby! (the baby has already arrived, it won't coincide with their move).

B: Yes that is right. But the house that I am renting at the moment was sold a couple of months ago. The new owner would like to make some renovations. So I need to move.

A: Have you found a new house? I think it is hard to rent a house at this time of the year when students are going to start their new semester. The majority of houses are booked by them.

B: That’s make me really scared! Luckily, one of my friends is going home to our country for good. The owner of his house has offered to let me replace her. I accepted the offer without hesitation.

A: Where is the new house?

B: It is not far from here, I think it is about 4 kilometres away.
Thanks nona the brit,
Regards,
Fizzi