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Hi,

I listen to music over internet/on internet/ by internet/by CDs/ on CDs.

I usually listen to music when I go to bed.Sometimes I listen when I study and work/I'm studying....working.

when I'm alone and doing house chores I listen to rock music like Tokyo hotel ,Linkin Park......

Internet consists of update music/ includes updated music.

By listening to music I become relaxed and go to sleep./to dream.
Listening to music is enjoyable for me.

I'm older than my brother, He's 6years old and gonna go to school 2 months later.This year I passed pre-university exam and I will go to university perhaps next year(maybe).

Regards
R.N
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I listen to music over the Internet. OK, but on is a better choice.
I listen to music on CDs.

Sometimes I listen to music while I work or study.
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Sometimes I listen to music while working or studying.

When I'm alone and doing house chores, I listen to rock music like Tokyo Hotel and Linkin Park.
The Internet has updated music.

Listening to music is enjoyable for me. It's not wrong, but no native English speaker would say this.

I find listening to music enjoyable.
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I enjoy listening to music.

I'm older than my brother. He's 6 years old and is going to go to school in 2 months. This year, I passed the pre-university exam, and I will attend the university perhaps next year. Maybe would be redundant here.
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Thanks for swift reply.HelpfulEmotion: clap. But about the last sentence which one is better Maybe or Perhaps?
In my opinion, perhaps is more fitting in that particular sentence. Note that perhaps is more formal than maybe.
The latest music is available on the internet.
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How about "go to dream" ? Have you ever noticed this expression somewhere? I never up to now.