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I am not sure if it is correct the grammar. Can someone check it?

The flow field follows a power law, i.e., the velocity drops away very slowly with the channel height W and the effect of the channel walls on the flow field is smaller than for a bulk system. We also see that the flow field is affected by the channel walls and therefore the flow field pass near the particle, i.e., is in the vicinity of the particle.

Thanks,
Laura
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Hi,

I am not sure if it is correct the grammar. Can someone check it?

The flow field follows a power law, i.e., the velocity drops away very slowly with the channel height W and the effect of the channel walls on the flow field is smaller than for a bulk system. We also see that the flow field is affected by the channel walls and therefore the flow field passes near the particle, i.e., is in the vicinity of the particle. (period)

Clive

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The second sentence is correct.

We also see that .............

The first one I think also, but I am not sure with the following expressions:

........... the velocity drops away very slowly with the channel height ............ is smaller than for ..........

Maybe there is some one that can help you with that.
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