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I live in a small village called the Marshwood. There aren't much many people in my village. There are only a little houses and shops. However, the shops sell a lots of basic things like the bread and the milk. There isn't many much public transport either. There are only a little buses during the week and on Sundays there aren't some any. Most of a people travel to work in the city by car. (original sentence: Most of a people travel by car to work in the city)
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