Friends, Iam very poor in grammar. Please correct me..

"LOVE" is a four lettered word on which the whole world stands. With out love the whole world is useless. In this world, you can find the love every where.

Always beleave in people who scolds you in front and correct you rather than the people who lifts you in front and criticize at back. To get a person who really loves you is very difficult. I call a person is luckiest in this world when he have some body, who loves him. In front of their love nothing in this world can meet.

In love there will be no artificial smiles, money, business, loss. There will be allways one curve on you face. The person in love will not smile with his mouth, but with his eyes. That says the love from his heart. There is nothing in this world called good love or bad love.

Try to Love others to get someone to love you.

Hello m.s.

Rather than correcting your grammar myself, I have pointed out some places where it needs changing, as you may prefer to try it for yourself. Let me know if you don't understand my comments!


Love is a four-lettered word] > four-letter word

on which the whole world stands.] 'stands' is not quite the right word here; try 'depends'.

With out love] without

the whole world is useless. ] 'useless' isn't the right word; it has too colloquial a sound. Can you find a different adjective?

In this world, you can find the love every where. ] No need for an article for 'love'. 'every where'] one word: everywhere.

Always beleave in people who scolds you in front and correct you] Check spelling of 'beleave'. By 'in front', do you mean 'to your face'?

rather than the people who lifts you in front and criticize at back. ] Try using 'praise you to your face'; and 'behind your back'.

To get a person who really loves you is very difficult.] Not 'to get': that means 'to acquire'. Try to find another verb.

I call a person is luckiest in this world ] Look at 'is' here: are you sure you need it?

when he have some body, who loves him. ] somebody who loves

In front of their love nothing in this world can meet. ] Try to find another phrase for 'in front of', and another verb for 'meet'.

In love there will be no artificial smiles, money, business, loss. ] 'money, business, loss': you may need to make the meaning clearer here.

There will be allways one curve on you face.] ?'one curve'

The person in love will not smile with his mouth, but with his eyes.] A person in love

That says the love from his heart. ] Insert a verb after love

Try to Love others to get someone to love you. ] Can you rephrase this as an 'if' statement? e.g. 'If you want someone to love you,...'


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MrP
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LOVE is not just a four-lettered word, but it's the mainstay for whole life. The life will be

futile With out love.You can find Love in the whole universe.

Always believe in shrew who allways scolds in front of you and correct you right there, rather than the people who criticize behind the back. It's very difficult to have a person who really loves you.I call a person luckiest in this world when he have somebody who loves. Then we can say that, there is nothing in this world is equal to that love.

A person in love will not smile with his mouth, but with his eyes. That shows a real love in his heart. There is nothing in this world called good love or bad love.

"If you want someone to love, Learn to Love others"

Go and kiss the world with your love....
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Hello m/s

Try this:



LOVE is not just a four-letter word, but the mainstay of your whole life. Your life will be futile without love. You can find Love throughout the universe.

Always trust someone who criticises you to your face and corrects you there and then, rather than the person who criticises you behind your back. It's hard to find a person who really loves you. You're the luckiest person in the world, if you have somebody who loves you. You could say that nothing in this world is equal to that love.

A person in love doesn't just smile with his mouth, he smiles with his eyes. That shows a real love in his heart. There is no such thing as good love or bad love.

"If you want someone to love, learn to love others."

Go and kiss the world with your love....


MrP