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Writing news release is similar to writing hard news. There are some different points that public relations practitioners have to concentrate on. First, public relation practitioners have to spend more time to write news release. They need to do well research and interview. Then they have to make the news release approved by the reporter. Public relations practitioners should address reporter interest by concentrating on the news values. If the news release is not approved by the reporter, it will not be published to the medium.

Another point is public relations practitioners have to put the organization information in the news release, including other important information. The style of writing should be simple and short. In addition, public relations practitioners have to use feature approaches for the story. Another important point is they have to fit everything in the deadline.
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Writing news release is similar to writing hard news. There are some different points that public relations practitioners have to concentrate on. First, public relation practitioners have to spend more time to write news release. They need to do well research and interview. Then they have to make the news release approved by the reporter. Public relations practitioners should address reporter interest by concentrating on the news values. If the news release is not approved by the reporter, it will not be published to the medium.

Another point is public relations practitioners have to put the organization information in the news release, including other important information. The style of writing should be simple and short. In addition, public relations practitioners have to use feature approaches for the story. Another important point is they have to fit everything in the deadline.
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I'm not quite sure what are the mistakes. I tried to edit the paragraphs. If it is not correct, please suggest me the correct words.

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- Writing the news release is similar to writing hard news.

- First, public relation practitioners have to spend more time writing news release.

- They need to do good research and interview. Then they have to make the news release approved by the reporter.

- Public relations practitioners should address reporter's interest by concentrating on the news values.

- If the news release is not approved by the reporter, it will not be published to the media.

- Furthermore, public relations practitioners have to put the organisation information in the news release, including other important information.

- In addition, public relations practitioners have to use feature approaches technique for the story.

- Another important point is they have to fit everything to meet the deadline.
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Could somone cheack what I edited again. I'm not really sure about them, especially "aprroved".

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- Writing a news release is similar to writing hard news.

- Firstly, public relation practitioners have to spend more time writing news releases.

- They need to conduct good research and interviews. Then they have to make the news release appeal to the reporters. (approved - reporters don't approve stories for publication, they either like them or they don't. They then have to persuade their editors to run them, perhaps that could be considered more of an approval, but really 'approved' is not an appropriate word here.

- Public relations practitioners can increase a reporter's interest by concentrating on the news value of the story.

- If the news release does not appeal to the reporter, it will not be published in the media.

- Furthermore, public relations practitioners have to put the organisation's information in the news release as well as including other important information.

- In addition, public relations practitioners have to use (feature approaches technique) for the story. (I suspect you mean that the PR people have to be aware of 'forward features' and use their knowledge to provide journalists with relevant items. I don't like the phrase 'feature approaches technique', it is not a standard phrase in English language PR and does not sufficiently explain what you mean to be used in a non-idiomatic sense.)

- Another important point is that they have to fit in with the media's deadlines.
Thank you so much, Nona the brit.

I appreciated your help.

Feature approach is something that will hook the reporter like a feature lead. (I read this from the book.)

It will catch a reporter's attention. It's somthing like this. Emotion: big smile
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