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hello everyone, i just joined to this group i don't know if i should write my question here or not! but plase correct my sentence

" THE MOST USAGE WAS DEVOTED TO TELEVISION AND FREZZER RESPECTIVELY, 98 AND 80 PERSENT THROUGH OUT THE YEARS BEFORE VACUM CLEANER HAS MORE UTILIZATION OF REFREGERATOR"

thanks in adnave,
sanaz
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Hello, Sanaz, and welcome to English Forums. Please do not post in all capital letters; it is very difficult to edit.

TELEVISIONs AND FREezERs were the most-used appliances, at 98% AND 80% respectively, THROUGHOUT THE YEARS BEFORE the VACuUM CLEANER appeared.
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Hi Sanaz, and welcome!

I would like to help you with your sentence, but I'm not sure what it means. Emotion: crying

Maybe something like this?
- Throughout the years, the television and the freezer have had the most usage, 98 and 80 percent respectively.

(I'm not sure what you mean about the vacuum cleaner and the refrigerator.)
sanaz_bchHello everyone, I just joined to this group I don't know if I should write my question here or not! But please correct my sentence.

" THE MOST USAGE WAS DEVOTED TO TELEVISION AND FREZZER RESPECTIVELY, 98 AND 80 PERSENT THROUGH OUT THE YEARS BEFORE VACUM CLEANER HAS MORE UTILIZATION OF REFREGERATOR"

thanks in advance,
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thanks alot for your helpEmotion: smile
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i really thank you... i am teaching english but i didn't know what my student mean by that!!!!! you helped me alot Emotion: smile