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I got an essay due tomorrow. Could you correct my writting please?

Introducing the Moola ring. It is a smart ring packed with many features that will blow you away. We are going to breakdown what Moola smart ring can do. One of the most tremendous features of this ring is: wireless charging. With our fast charging stand, you can finish charging your ring in a jiffy by tapping your ring on the charging stand. The Built-in NFC feature makes payments easier than ever. Tap your ring on any NFC supported payment machines and your payment is made. Moreover, The NFC feature can communicate with other “NFC enabled” devices such as doors, mobile phones. Now you do not need a key. Tap! The Moola ring unlocks it for you. In addition, it has a GPS feature in case you lost your ring. You can track your ring using our smart phone app. Also, the “grow” feature. Never lost in the dark again because Moola ring can act as a torch. What is more, the material. It is made with a top-notch, scratch-proof material.

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We don't help with homework assignments, I'm afraid. Your teacher wants to know what you can do, not what we can do,

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Actually, it's not a homework. If it is, my teacher ain't gonna check and correct my grammar flaws anyway. I just bait it by saying that it due tomorrow because I wanna know what mistakes I've been made on my writing and get it corrected in no time.

Anyway, is it ok to add em dash? "....in a jiffy--by tapping your r...."

Introducing the Moola ring. It is a smart ring packed with many features that will blow you away. We are going to breakdown what Moola smart ring can do. One of the most tremendous features of this ring is: wireless charging. With our fast charging stand, you can finish charging your ring in a jiffy--by tapping your ring on the charging stand. The Built-in NFC feature makes payments easier than ever. Tap your ring on any NFC supported payment machines and your payment is made. Moreover, The NFC feature can communicate with other “NFC enabled” devices such as doors, mobile phones. Now you do not need a key. Tap! The Moola ring unlocks it for you. In addition, it has a GPS feature in case you lost your ring. You can track your ring using our smart phone app. Also, the “grow” feature. Never lost in the dark again because Moola ring can act as a torch. What is more, the material. It is made with a top-notch, scratch-proof material.

mosja I just bait it by saying that it due tomorrow because I wanna know what mistakes I've been made on my writing and get it corrected in no time.

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