+0
Hey!

Can anyone please correct something I have written and I am not sure about if it's ok or not.
Thank you very much.

The text is:

"Sometimes I am more inclined to think over the question you raise rather than analyse the photograph itself. And this one reached the very inside of me. It's Amazing.

That was a beautiful question. I would like to leave behind the essence of a generous, beautiful heart. I want my legacy to be one that all of the people who have been around me are proud of such humilty I was able to touch them with".
+0
"Sometimes I am more inclined to think over the question you raise rather than analyse the photograph itself. And this one reached the very inside of me. It's Amazing. OK

That was a beautiful question. I would like to leave behind the essence of a generous, beautiful heart. I want my legacy to be one that all of the people who have been around me are proud of such humilty I was able to touch them with". The underlined part is problematic. "Proud of" is a phrasal verb, and its object is the relative pronoun "that", which references "legacy". But it is confused with another object "humility". You need to rewrite this.
Comments  
Help please!!!!
 AlpheccaStars's reply was promoted to an answer.