I think my greatest accomplishment has been getting
professional in Graphic and working as a graphic designer.
I’ve managed to achieve many experience in during of my work
by this time next year I’d really like to have gone out of iran
to reach my goals. one goal I’d like to have achieved is going
to a ballet school.in addition I hope I’ll have been a
professional ballet dancer.
Another aim of mine i'd like to have reached by next year is
speaking english like a native person.
The corrections:- I think my greatest accomplishment has been getting
professional in Graphic and "work" as a graphic designer.
I’ve managed to achieve many experience (in) during (of) my work +,+
by this time next year I’d really like to have (gone) out of iran
to reach my goals. o(O)ne goal I’d like to have achieved is going
to a ballet school.i(I)n addition +,+ I hope I’ll have been a
professional ballet dancer.
Another aim of mine i'd like to have reached by next year is
speaking english like a native person.
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I think my greatest accomplishment has been getting
professional in Graphic and work as a graphic designer.
I’ve managed to achieve many experience during my work,
by this time next year I’d really like to go out of iran
to reach my goals. One goal I’d like to have achieved is going
to a ballet school. In addition, I hope I’ll have been a
professional ballet dancer.
Another aim of mine i'd like to have reached by next year is
speaking english like a native person.
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I think my greatest accomplishments are to be pursuing
professional in Graphic and working as a graphic designer.
I’ve managed to achieve enough experience during course of my professional work
by this time next year I’d really like to have gone out of Iran
to achieve my goals. One goal, I’d like to have achieved is to attend ballet school. Moreover I hope that I’ll have been a professional ballet dancer.
Another goal of mine that I cherish the most is to be speaking english like native speaker by next year.
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