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This is a letter I wrote my friend. Could you please help me correct the grammar. Thanks so much..

Every time getting your reply, I'm very delighted.

Have you already got through the exam ? How was you doing ? it was good ? I hope so. Now, I also prepare the final exam before having the Lunar New Year. Everything gradually makes me get busy.Ah, to tell you about this, I've just decided to retake part in "W&T' again. This time, I hope I will make a great trip in the US. And I have much time to prepare for it, not like the previous trip, nothing was prepared Emotion: sad It's great. But I still don't know where I will set foot, I want to discover another state.

About my country, hehe. First of all, I'm really suprised at the age of getting married in your country because, in my country, people get married at about 27 or 28. That usually happens in the city. But in many countrysides, ones get married so soon that it's incredible. Try guessing !!! That's.......17 or 18 years old for women maybe less than, oh my god ! That is also a problem my government need to have methods to improve this one. In compensation, people who live in the countryside have much great virtue than others; for instance, their honesty. I appreciate love them about this. I love the climate, the scenery, and people... there Emotion: big smile How about you, in your country ? One more thing that Vietnamese are very hospitable, this will be proved when you visit VietNam, haha. It's true that we are happy when foreigner can speak vietnamese. I think it's the same as your country, is that it ?

I usually go online in my free time, almost everyday, to read the news, to listen to music, to learn english... As you said, you've joined yoga club, I've also join a kung-fu club, karate, in the evening, hehe. Quite tired but great. Which kung-fu is popular in ur country ? Taekwondo, Karate, Judo and Vovinam (vietnamese kung-fu) is the most popular in my country.

Have you ever tried practising the kung fu ? If so, which one ?

I look forward to your reply.

Best wishes,
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Every time getting your reply, I'm very delighted.

Have you already got through the exam ? How was you doing ? it was good ? I hope so. Now, I also prepare the final exam before having the Lunar New Year. Everything gradually makes me get busy.Ah, to tell you about this, I've just decided to retake part in "W&T' again. This time, I hope I will make a great trip in the US. And I have much time to prepare for it, not like the previous trip, nothing was prepared. It's great. But I still don't know where I will set foot, I want to discover another state.

About my country, hehe. First of all, I'm really suprised at the age of getting married in your country because, in my country, people get married at about 27 or 28. That usually happens in the city. But in many countrysides, ones get married so soon that it's incredible. Try guessing !!! That's.......17 or 18 years old for women maybe less than, oh my god ! That is also a problem my government need to have methods to improve this one. In compensation, people who live in the countryside have much great virtue than others; for instance, their honesty. I appreciate love them about this. I love the climate, the scenery, and people... there How about you, in your country ? One more thing that Vietnamese are very hospitable, this will be proved when you visit VietNam, haha. It's true that we are happy when foreigner can speak vietnamese. I think it's the same as your country, is that it ?

I usually go online in my free time, almost everyday, to read the news, to listen to music, to learn english... As you said, you've joined yoga club, I've also join a kung-fu club, karate, in the evening, hehe. Quite tired but great. Which kung-fu is popular in ur country ? Taekwondo, Karate, Judo and Vovinam (vietnamese kung-fu) is the most popular in my country.

Have you ever tried practising the kung fu ? If so, which one ?

I look forward to your reply.

Best wishes,
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Hi,

Can somebody tell me which is more correct of the two sentences below:

1. I feel bad about not have given you the points you deserved Not correct grammar

2. I feel bad about not having given you the points you deserved Correct

Also, if you want to know if something belongs to him or her, do you ask is that her's/his? Is this right grammar? Yes, it is.

Clive
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Newbie2007This is a letter I wrote my friend. Could you please help me correct the grammar. Thanks so much..

Every time getting I get your reply, I'm very delighted.

Have you already got through the exam ? How was were you doing ? it was Was it good ? I hope so. Now, I am also preparing for the final exam before having until the Lunar New Year comes. Everything gradually makes me get busy. Ah, to tell you about this come to think of it, I've just decided to retake part in "W&T' again. This time, I hope I will make a great trip in the US. And I have much time to prepare for it, not like unlike for the previous trip, when nothing was prepared. It will be great. But I still don't know where I will set foot, I want to discover another state.

About my country, hehe. First of all, I'm really surprised at the age of getting married people get married in your country at you because(,) at us, those who live in cities people get married tie the knot somewhere at the age of about 27 or 28.Thathappens. many countrysides, Their counterparts in the country do so, however, ones get married so soon that it's incredible suprisingly early. Try guessing !!! That's ... 17 or 18 years old for women or maybe even less than, oh my god ! That is also a problem my government need to have methods to improve this one need to find a method to tackle with. In compensation, people who live in the countryside have much great virtues that others those in cities do not; for instance, their honesty. I appreciate love them about for this reason. I love the climate, the scenery, and people... there Emotion: big smile How about you, in your country ? One more thing: Vietnamese are very hospitable -- this will be proved when you visit VietNam, haha. It's true that we are happy whena foreigner can speak Vietnamese. I think it's the same as the same is the case in your country(,). Is that so?

I usually go online in my free time, almost everyday, to read the news, to listen to music, to learn English... (As) you said(,) you've joined a yoga club(,). I('ve) also join go to a kung-fu club , karate, in the evening, hehe. Quite tiring but great. Which kung-fu is popular in your country ? Taekwondo, Karate, Judo and Vovinam (vietnamese kung-fu) is the most popular in my country.

Have you ever tried practising the kung fu ? If so, which branch?

I am looking forward to your reply. (with -ing, the tone is warmer)

Best wishes,
Can somebody tell me which is more correct of the two sentences below:

1. I feel bad about not have given you the points you deserved

2. I feel bad about not having given you the points you deserved

Also, if you want to know if something belongs to him or her, do you ask is that her's/his? Is this right grammar?

Thanks.
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Thanks, Clive!