+0
help me to correct the composition...

To whom it may concern,

I am writing to you here because I am planning to open an on-line store. I would like to inquire the usage permission of your company's (official) website and products. I am grateful if I may. If not, would you please advise of ways that I may obtain the usage approval? If possible, would you please also advise how I may obtain the picture files? May I download them directly from your website or you could mail me the CD with the picture files.

If there is any charge for the usage, please advise the amount. Thank you and I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

XXXXX
+0
Hi,

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you because I am planning to open an on-line store. I would like to obtain your permission to include a link to your company's (official) website. <<< Is this what you want? I'm not sure. If there is any charge for this link, please let me know.

If possible, please also advise how I may obtain your picture files? May I download them directly from your website, or perhaps you could mail me a CD with them? I'd be happy to pay for the mailing costs.

Thank you and I look forward to your reply.



Sincerely,

Comments  
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?
thank you.^^

To what an extent spirituality can become a positive element in a person’s life?


Nowadays, spirituality is an enormous factor which increased around people who likes being in peace, being calm or leaving for a good time of their surroundings. It’s an excellent option.

There are many reasons which prove that spiritual practices are associated with better health. Spirituallity activities guide you to direct your attention to a specific focus or sensations. Many of these practices have the purpose to increase the attention too, as well as quiet the mind. Meditation, for example, is one of the most benefit activities to be relaxed. I t is also associated with many positive emotions such as being generous and self-confident. Spirituality encourages people to be positive with themselves.

Apart from that, these activities of spiritually can also help a lot. To heal the pain that comes with difficult experiences of life and to make better and healthier choices for the future are good cases. Some other people says that it may help to live longer, even feelings of anger or hurt can be replaced by happiness, peace and forgiveness.

On the other hand, a lot of People don’t like spirituality. They seem not to have enough time to do activities such as yoga that includes relaxing. They don’t need these activities to be relaxed and feel well with themselves and with others.

In my opinion, spirituality is essential for all. It heals and relax, including for people who don’t like it. I think also that everybody can take advantage if they have the opportunity to perform some activity of spirituality.