Are these sentences correct?

1- "This article mostly aims at filling the gap in the science that how beat perception occurs in CI recipients."

2- "I became more and more interested to make a merger between music and psychology."

3- "The reason that I choose to study in a foreign country instead of my own country is first because none of the Iranian universities work in the area of music neuroscience or related fields and there is not a scientist working in this area. A few studies done in this field in my country has been carried out by some who specialize in other areas than in music neuroscience."

4- "I find it incumbent upon myself to return to my country as soon as my studies are finished to be beside her for the rest of her life. "

You might be interested in:

Error Recognition?

I hope I can get help correcting this exercise with an explanation, thank you!!! detect the error in the underlined words 1 - The cytoskeleton of a cell provides structural...


Hello, I hope I get help with correcting this exercise... Thank you! Exercise 1: Identify the good topic sentences in the following examples and EXPLAIN: A- Everybody loves...

Correction Of Grammar?

Did you still went to church, is it correct?

About Online Correction Of Writing Task?

How can i get correction of my writing task one and 2

Gmat Questions?

Hello, I have done some sentence correction exercises in GMAT,.I fell confused about some of them. 1 I am aware that there are difficulties in the way ,quite a few of them of...