Hi Guru,

I intend to send following message to my colleagues. Please would you correct it. Thank you

All staff,

Following to last XYZ meeting, we would like to request all staff to check to ensure their individual information on following link:

<<<Link goes here>>>

If the information incorrect, it is advised that you should update it as soon as possible. Please let me know for further assistance.

Thank you.
To all staff:

Pursuant to the last XYZ meeting, we would like to request all staff to check to ensure the correctness and completeness of their individual information on the following link:

<<<Link goes here>>>

If the information is incorrect, please update it as soon as possible. Please let me know if you need further assistance.

Thank you.
Hi Guru - Micawber

A big thank you for correcting my message. Now it sounds very good.