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Dear Gentlemen,

"Big win needs you to take big risks." Bill Gates

The previous perfect little phrase encourages me to think about the Risks related to dreaming after I finished my study at the faculty of computers and information with grade "very good"; by listening to my tendencies for expanding my knowledge in computer science especially Artificial intelligence (AI), Internet Of things (IoT) and Web Of things (WoT), I found this achieve with master's degree, but I want a productive land with new culture in everything such as the langue and the education; throughout this culture I will discover more than country, the moving of home country to foreign country is pleasant and difficult but at the end the result will be associated with practical experiences and this is my interest.

general secondary education helps me continuously to understand everything depending on the logic, proofs, and prediction with approximate results; this rule accompanied me along bachelor's degree, changed me from viewer or user to programmer or developer by giving anything the ability to think and contribute in the enhancement and progress of the countries via apply the developed artificial intelligence.


At subjects of bachelor's from the first year in faculty to bachelor's year, orderly, introduction to computer, principles of programming, Artificial Intelligence(AI); besides the personal effort to obtain the certification CCNA (Cisco Certified Network Associate, acquiring of the valuable information respecting Internet of Things(IoT),Web of Things(WoT);via reading integrated researches related to them..

my countries are on the road of Artificial intelligence(AI), recently Information Technology Industry Development Agency(ITIDA) and the international companies(Hewlett Packard Enterprise, Ingram Micro)have agreed together on working together; where company High-Performance Estate(HPE)will prepare the specialized workshop in the Artificial Intelligence(AI)in this workshop will be provided modern technology and necessary processing tools for deep learning aiming to support innovation of Egyptian youth; mission of "Ingram Micro" company will be by giving related courses with Artificial Intelligence(AI) and supported scholarships.

I have the same wishes of these companies in my country but by study a master abroad and then back to my countries to reduce the gap of the approach between them and foreign countries; my later hope, construction of company on my personal land to teach and publish Artificial intelligence (AI) with the latest development and impression from countries of west.

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guava panda 80"Big win needs you to take big risks." Bill Gates

If you are going to write a quote, make sure it is accurate. Otherwise you look very very bad to the reader, especially if it starts your argument.

guava panda 80The previous perfect little phrase

Oh dear! It is not that!

guava panda 80Risks

Risk is a common noun, not a proper noun.

guava panda 80by listening to my tendencies

I don't think that tendencies make any sound.

guava panda 80The previous perfect little phrase encourages me to think about the Risks related to dreaming after I finished my study at the faculty of computers and information with grade "very good"; by listening to my tendencies for expanding my knowledge in computer science especially Artificial intelligence (AI), Internet Of things (IoT) and Web Of things (WoT), I found this achieve with master's degree, but I want a productive land with new culture in everything such as the langue and the education; throughout this culture I will discover more than country, the moving of home country to foreign country is pleasant and difficult but at the end the result will be associated with practical experiences and this is my interest.

All that stream of words is one rambling, garbled, incomprehensible sentence. The yellow highlighted phrases are the worst parts.



If I were you, I would throw this letter in the waste bin and start over.