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Could you please help me correct these sentences? I'm not sure how to say them.

- All the money that you get for food on your paystub doesn't correspond to the food you got per day on shift during the month you're getting paid for but the month before that. It's one month off. You get paid feburary incidentals at the end of march and not at the end of feb.

- The number you have on your screen corresponds/match the number you have on the print out, if not then something went wrong.

- I asked if she had ever tried strawberry jam. She said she had tried apricot jam. What does that have to do with strawberry is what I asked myself when I heard the answer.

Could you please tell me which to say?

- Call me telling me what time the pary is (at)

- I need total silence/I need for it to be totally silent to sleep.

- I like my bed ten times more than this one.

- She went there the day of her birthday./on her birthday.

Thank you
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[The first sentence is just too much information. Break it down.]

2. matches

party is

of her birthday
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Could you please help me correct these sentences please?

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The first one is broken down into several sentences. Could you please help me make it better?

and one thing Is correspônd synonymous with match? like in french : Ces numeros correspondent au numero sur l'ecran.

In the first question I've used CORRESPOND, would you use correspond or a different word?

Can you please tell me which you would say and if you would say these a different way?

- I need total silence/I need for it to be totally silent to sleep.

- I like my bed ten times more than this one.

Thank you