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Hi,

Could you comment on this paragraph please?

"The inclusion criteria were: physical health, absence of cardiovascular diseases, hepatitis B and C, diabetes, and chronic illness, healthy hearing system, hearing threshold below 25 dB, and not taking vitamins C and E supplementation before and during the study."


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Could you comment on this paragraph please?

"The inclusion criteria were: physical health, absence of cardiovascular diseases, hepatitis B and C, diabetes, and chronic illness, healthy hearing system, hearing threshold below 25 dB, and not taking vitamins C and E supplementation before and during the study."

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Everybody has physical health of some kind. You need to say good physical health.

Either remove the colon, or make it "The inclusion criteria were as follows: physical health, …."