Dear Sir/Madam,

Having a BTS Tourism, I am writing to you apply for apostion as a crew member.

Young, dynamic and enthusiastic, I would highly like to begin in the active life. My excellent communication skills with the customers, my availability, having a perfect computer skills will be, I hope for it, decisive in your eyes.

I speak two foreign languages French, English and has an intermediate level in Spanish. My resume which is enclosed, showing further information of my education, experience and backgroud.

Very organized and methodical, I will able to be adapt whatever my assignment. I learned what giving good customers sevice means and developed a real sense of team sprit.

I hope that you find my resume of interest and I look forward to the possibility of a personal interview to discuss my skills and interests further.

Thanks you very much for considering my application.

Yours faithfully,

Jasmine
Jasmine8319I didn't like the one sentence here and looking for any other alternatives Emotion: embarrassed here I changed a bit but i am not sure does it sound nice for cover letter?

thanks again, jasmine

Dear Sir/Madam,

Having a BTS Tourism, I am writing to you apply for apostion as a crew member.

Young, dynamic and enthusiastic, I would like to start my career life. My excellent communication skills with the customers, my availability, having a perfect computer skills will be, I hope for it, decisive in your eyes.

I speak two foreign languages French, English and has an intermediate level in Spanish. My resume which is enclosed, showing further information of my education, experience and backgroud.

Very organized and methodical, I will able to be adapt whatever my assignment. I learned what giving good customers sevice means and developed a real sense of team sprit.

I hope that you find my resume of interest and I look forward to the possibility of a personal interview to discuss my skills and interests further.

Thanks you very much for considering my application.

Yours faithfully,

Jasmine

I think it does! Anyway whatever it is, I have sent it already Emotion: smile

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