Here is my recommendation letter to university. I am planning to become an exchange student(KTH, Sweden).
Could you please check my recommendation? Do i need to add anything to my letter?

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"Name" studies in "X" since September 2005. During this time he has demonstrated excellent results in the studied disciplines.

He is an open, intelligent and capable student. During lections "Name" is attentive and concentrated; he perceives study material profoundly and can follow the thread of a lecture easily. He is disposed to technical thinking and conceptual perception of material.

"Name" tends to approach solving of tasks creatively, choosing his own principles of mastering subject and being well able to complete the initiated. He also has positive experience of solving complex tasks under time-pressured conditions.

Student’s firm knowledge of mathematics is confirmed by his examination results – he has got 9 (excellent) in both semesters.

On a communicational level "Name" is responsive to his colleagues and is eager to help whenever possible. He is good at team work, being able to consider and analyse different opinions and taking the lead when necessary.

"Name" strongly aims at development of his personal and professional skills and is actively involved both in academic and extracurricular activities.

I am pleased to recommend "Name" for admission to your university exchange program as a purposeful and responsible student."
AG-James, it is not necessary for letters to be full of "high falutin' language." I don't know if you need to add anything - I"m not the director of admissions.

Here is my recommendation letter to university. I am planning to become an exchange student(KTH, Sweden). Could you please check my recommendation? Do i need to add anything to my letter? "

"Name" studies in "X" since September 2005. During this time he has demonstrated excellent results in the studied disciplines. He is an open, intelligent and capable student. During lections "Name" is attentive and concentrated; he perceives study material profoundly and can follow the thread of a lecture easily. He is disposed to technical thinking and conceptual perception of material. "Name" tends to approach solving of tasks creatively, choosing his own principles of mastering subject and being well able to complete the initiated. He also has positive experience of solving complex tasks under time-pressured conditions. Student’s firm knowledge of mathematics is confirmed by his examination results – he has got 9 (excellent) in both semesters. On a communicational level "Name" is responsive to his colleagues and is eager to help whenever possible. He is good at team work, being able to consider and analyse different opinions and taking the lead when necessary. "Name" strongly aims at development of his personal and professional skills and is actively involved both in academic and extracurricular activities. I am pleased to recommend "Name" for admission to your university exchange program as a purposeful and responsible student.

"Name" has studied at "X" since September 2005 and has consistently been an excellent student. He is an open, intelligent and capable student. In lectures, "Name" is attentive, and he easily understands the material and follows the thread of a lecture. He is disposed to technical thinking and conceptual perception of material.

"Name" has a creative approach to solving problems, [choosing his own principles of mastering the subject - again, I'm not sure what you mean] and has excellent follow-through, always finishing what he starts. He solves complex tasks, even when under under tight deadlines. His strong knowledge of mathematics is demonstrated by his examination results: he received a 9 (excellent) both semesters.

In terms of interpersonal communicational, "Name" is responsive to his colleagues and is eager to help whenever possible. He is good at team work, able to consider and analyse different opinions, and takes the lead when necessary.

"Name" has a strong desire to develop his personal and professional skills and is actively involved both in academic and extracurricular activities. I am pleased to recommend "Name" for admission to your university exchange program as a conscientious and responsible student.

CHECK MY SPELLING - I'm a terrible speller!

Good luck with your program.
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OK, looks good, but to be honest I dont see you strength or weaknesses here. Yes, you are a good student but, its just talking....what are the activities you have done and conferences its not clear....I dont see why do you apply and what field you want to study and why????

Why should I choose you as a good student is not clear.....maybe I am wrong. Hope you will not be dissapointed....we all study and share information....

Good luck