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The emotional roller coaster I went through watching yesterday's football match was so unbearable. Sometimes, I hated watching football for letting me ride such an ordeal. However, the feeling of knowing my favorite team won at the end is pure bliss.

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robertog

The emotional roller coaster I went through watching yesterday's football match was so unbearable. Sometimes, I hated hate watching football for letting me ride such an ordeal. However, the feeling of knowing my favorite team won at the end is pure bliss.

There's just one phrase that's off. You can't ride an ordeal, not even metaphorically. You should try something like

I hate watching football for making me go through such an ordeal.

CJ

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Thank You!

You don't go through a roller coaster.

anonymous

You don't go through a roller coaster.

Good point.

Can you suggest a rewrite for the OP?

CJ

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CalifJimCan you suggest a rewrite for the OP?

The emotional roller coaster that was yesterday's football match was so unbearable. Sometimes I hate football for putting me through such an ordeal. But the feeling I get from seeing my favorite team win in the end is pure bliss.

is this more acceptable?


The emotional roller coaster I experienced watching yesterday's football match was so unbearable. Sometimes, I hate watching football for making me go through such an ordeal. However, the feeling of knowing my favorite team won at the end is pure bliss.

robertog

is this more acceptable?


The emotional roller coaster I experienced watching yesterday's football match was so unbearable. Sometimes, I hate watching football for making me go through such an ordeal. However, the feeling of knowing my favorite team won at the end is pure bliss.

Yes. It's fine.

CJ

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CalifJimCan you suggest a rewrite for the OP?

The emotional roller coaster that was yesterday's football match was so unbearable. Sometimes I hate football for putting me through such an ordeal. But the feeling I get from seeing my favorite team win in the end is pure bliss.

Fine.

CJ

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