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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words


The line graph shows the quantity of university graduates in Canada in the period from 1992 to 2006. It can be seen that there are two lines: the "pink line" shows the female number and the "blue one" shows the male number.


Overall, the two lines fluctuated significantly over the research period. The pink line reached the peak in 2006 and the blue increased regularly.

At the first time of period, the female number which graduated is 100,000 and the male number is 70,0000. This number rose slightly then and in the next 2 years, the female number reached about 105,000 ; the male one reached about 75,000. After that, the amount has a slight reduction in the period from 1994 to 1998, but it was trivial.

At the end of the period, which from 1998 to 2006, all the lines rose dramatically. The "blue line" reached about 95,000 and the "pink line" reached the highest point of the graph, approximately 150,000.

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