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I'm having a hard time correcting thee sentences. Could you please take a look at them?

- How is he going to pull it off when his dad couldn't do it to begin with.
- They look like friends/like they are friends.
- She is a nice person, may I add that/if I may add she's pretty ugly, so you have nothing to worry about.
- You're cooking smells so bad, it's making me want to kill myself.
- I understand you better than you understand yourself.
- You have 5 hours on me, which is why you aren't tired. I went to sleep at 7 am you went to sleep at 2 am.
- I never thought I'd love someone the way I loved you.
- The fire has gotten worse./has spread.

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alc24I'm having a hard time correcting thee sentences. Could you please take a look at them?

- How is he going to pull it off when his dad couldn't do it to begin with. Needs a question mark
- They look like friends/like they are friends. Okay
- She is a nice person, may I add that/if I may add she's pretty ugly, so you have nothing to worry about. Don't understand what you want to say
- You're cooking smells so bad, it's making me want to kill myself. Astonishingly rude, but not ungrammatical
- I understand you better than you understand yourself. Okay
- You have 5 hours on me, which is why you aren't tired. I went to sleep at 7 am you went to sleep at 2 am. Need a period or a conjunction after 7 am
- I never thought I'd love someone the way I loved you. Okay, as long as you don't love this person any more
- The fire has gotten worse./has spread. Okay

Thank you

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Could you please help me with these sentences PLEASE?

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