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Could you please help me correct these sentences grammatically please?

1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying.
2 Can't you make it easier on/for me rather than making things harder on/for me.
3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad. It saddens me.
4 What does spending time with you entail/mean?
5 Let's forget this day ever existed.
6 I can tell from the way you shake/are shaking if you are crying.
7 Not one day has gone by that/when I didn't get your attention.
8 (By) looking at you, you'd think you were dying.
9 Will I have to keep doing that if I come with you?
10 You think your tooth is loose but that just a sensation/feeling.
11 In no other country will you receive unemployment benefits like the ones here.
12 His 2 front teeth are too close together./too apart.
13 She doesn't blush while getting hit on by a guy.
14 My favorite part of myself is my lips.

Thank you so much

Alc
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1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; such as when she's crying or upset.

2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.
This is similar, but has a different meaning:

Can't you be easier on me, rather than being hard on me?

3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad. It saddens me. Either version is OK. (be in a relationship/ have a relationship)

4 What does spending time with you entail/mean? Either one is OK.

5 Let's forget this day ever existed. OK

6 I can tell from the way you shake/are shaking that you are crying. Either one is OK.

7 Not one day has gone by that/when I didn't get your attention.
Either one is OK.

8 (By) looking at you, one would think you were dying.

9 Would I have to keep doing that if I came with you?

10 You think your tooth is loose but that just a sensation/feeling. Either one is OK.

11 In no other country will you receive unemployment benefits like you get here.

12 His 2 front teeth are too close together./too far apart.

13 She doesn't blush while getting hit on by a guy. Very informal (slang).

14 My favorite part of myself is my lips. OK
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Hi

1 You might be able to get her to say yes when she's at her weakest state; when she's crying. OK

2 Can't you make it easier for me rather than making things harder for me.

3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. It makes me sad. It saddens me ????.
I do not want to have a relationship like the one I had before.

4 What does spending time with you mean?

5 Let's forget this day ever existed. OK

6 I can tell from the way you shake/are shaking if you are crying. (I can tell from the way you shake when crying) (but it's an illogical sentence- what can u tell?)

7 Not one day has gone by that/when I didn't get your attention. (Illogical)

8 (By) looking at you, you'd (one would think) think you were dying. OK

9 Will I have to keep doing that if I come with you? Ok

11 In no other country will you receive unemployment benefits like the ones here. OK

12 His 2 front teeth are too close together. OK

13 She doesn't blush while getting hit on by a guy. OK

14 My favorite part of myself is my lips. (illogical)

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 AlpheccaStars's reply was promoted to an answer.
Here are the sentences where I have something to add.

1. Use a colon, not a semi-colon.

3 I don't want to have a relationship/be in a relationship like the one I had/was in before. One where my boyfriend didn't love me the way I wanted to be loved. [This is a sentence fragment, but conversationally okay. ] It makes me sad. It saddens me. [Don't you mean "It made me sad"?]

4 What does "spending time with you" entail/mean? [also: "involve"]

5 Let's forget that this day ever existed.

6 I can tell from by the way you shake/are shaking if that you are crying.

7 Not one day has gone by that/when I didn't get your attention.
Confusing. Not one day passed without you giving me your attention... Once you gave me your full attention every day...etc

10 You think your tooth is loose but that is just a sensation/feeling.

12 His 2 two front teeth are too close together/too far apart. [However, these are opposite cases, so pick one..]

13 She doesn't blush when while getting hit on by a guy.

14 My favorite part of myself is my lips. [My favorite body part??]