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Dear Sir, Madam,

Bonjour, my name is *** and I am a ***-year-old French currently living in France. I learned about your organization through the database which directly lead me to contact you to apply for this project, and I am particularly interested in spending time supporting it.

I have been a third year student at **** University and I recently completed my Bachelor’s Degree in Biology specialized in Health and food Science. Then I decided to take a break from my studies with the aim of pursuing my education in other meaningful ways such as working on a full-time job and volunteering.
I found out about the Voluntary Service program while doing some researches and I got to know more when I took part of the 1st campaign promoting youth mobility in the country in 2018. Since then, one of my goals was to get involved in a long-term volunteering project that matched my interests in bio conservation and environment because I love being immersed in nature and I have always been sensitized to environmental consciousness.

I like being active and I am opened to new challenges. I believe in learning by doing so the idea of volunteering aboard was the occasion to gain International experiences ,to spend quality time with people who share the same interests on various topics, to bring something new and be useful to others while developing new skills and learning more about myself .
In my free time, I enjoy outdoor activities such as nature photography, visiting my Island landscapes, hiking. My other activities include reading, dancing and listening to traditional music, as well as singing and cooking.

I would like to commit to a year’s placement with your organization in order to be helpful to the village while learning more about sustainable Agriculture through constructive and practical tasks on the farm. I have a good background in team working since I got to be part of several projects as a student in addition to being a member of a Traditional dancing team and an oratory club. I also enjoyed being in an artistry class which was a way to enhance my creativity while exchanging with other foreign students. I am proactive, conscientious, and I would like to use my abilities within the Community.
Moreover, volunteering in Finland has strengthened my choice of doing an EVS as I want to improve my English language skills, immerse myself in the Finland culture and know more about the Country.
I feel this opportunity would mean a great deal for my professional and personal growth. I am ready to learn and I would be very grateful if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project.
Thank you for reading me and if I can provide any further information, I would be glad to answer them via my e-mail address. I look forward to your response and future contact.

Yours Sincerely,

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Bonjour, my name is *** and I am a ***-year-old French person currently living in France. I learned about your organization through the database (??) which directly lead me to contact you to apply for this project, and I am particularly interested in spending time supporting it. (Do you want to raise money for this project)

I have been a third year (?) student at **** University and I recently completed my Bachelor’s Degree in Biology specializing ed in Health and food Science. Then I decided to take a break from my studies with the aim of pursuing my education in other meaningful ways such as working on a full-time job and volunteering.
I found out about the Voluntary Service program while doing some researches (wrong form) and I got to know more when I took part of the 1st campaign promoting youth mobility in the country (which country?) in 2018. Since then, one of my goals was to get involved in a long-term volunteering project that matched my interests in bio conservation and environment because I love being immersed in nature and I have always been sensitized (wrong word) to environmental consciousness.

I like being active and I am opened (wrong form) to new challenges. I believe in learning by doing so the idea of volunteering aboard (on a ship?) was the occasion to gain International experiences , (wrong form) to spend quality time with people who share the same interests on various topics, to bring something new and be useful to others while developing new skills and learning more about myself .
In my free time, I enjoy outdoor activities such as nature photography, visiting my Island (Do you own an island) landscapes, (missing word) hiking. My other activities include reading, dancing and listening to traditional music, as well as singing and cooking.

I would like to commit to a year’s placement with your organization in order to be helpful to the village while learning more about sustainable Agriculture through constructive and practical tasks on the farm. I have a good background in team working since I participated in got to be part of several projects as a student in addition to being a member of a Traditional dance dancing team and an oratory club. I also enjoyed being in an artistry (wrong word) class which was a way to enhance my creativity while exchanging (missing word) with other foreign students. I am proactive, (missing word) conscientious, and I would like to use my abilities within the Community.
Moreover, volunteering in Finland has strengthened my choice of doing an EVS (???) as I want to improve my English language skills, immerse myself in the Finland culture and know more about the Country.
I feel this opportunity would mean a great deal for my professional and personal growth. I am ready to learn and I would be very grateful if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project.
Thank you for reading me (wrong word) and if I can provide any further information, I would be glad to answer them via my e-mail address. I look forward to your response and future contact.

Yours Sincerely,

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Dear Sir/Madam,

[Strike]Bonjour, my name is *** and[/Strike] I am a ***-year-old French person, currently living in France. I learned about your organization through the database Internet, which directly lead led me to contact you to apply for this project, and I am particularly interested in spending time supporting it.

I have been a third year student at **** University and I recently [ year?] completed my bachelor’s degree in biology specialized with a specialization in health and food science. Then I decided to take a break from my studies with the aim of and to seek pursueing my education in other meaningful ways pursuits such as working on in a full-time job and volunteering.

I found out about the Voluntary Service program while doing some research, es and I got to know more when I took part of in the 1st campaign promoting youth mobility in the country in 2018. Since then, one of my goals was has been to get involved in a long-term volunteering project that matched my interests in bio-conservation and the environment because I love being immersed in nature and I have always been sensitized to environmentally conscious. ness.

I like being active, and I am opened to new challenges. I believe in learning by doing, so the idea of volunteering aboard was the occasion is an opportunity to gain international experiences, to spend quality time with people who share the same interests, on various topics, and to bring something new and be useful to others while developing new skills and learning more about myself.

In my free time, I enjoy outdoor activities such as nature photography, visiting my Island the beautiful areas and enjoying the landscapes on the island I live on, and hiking. My other activities interests include reading, dancing and listening to traditional music, as well as singing and cooking.

I would like to commit to a year’s placement with your organization in order to be helpful to the village while learning more about sustainable agriculture through constructive and practical tasks on the farm. I have a good background in value teamwork ing since I got to be took part of in several projects as a student in addition to being a member of a traditional dancing team and in an oratory club. I also enjoy ed being in an artistry class which was is a way for me to enhance my creativity while exchanging ideas with other foreign students. I am proactive, conscientious, and I would like to use my abilities within to serve the community.

Moreover, volunteering in Finland has strengthened my choice of doing an EVS as I want to improve my English language skills, immerse myself in the Finland Finnish culture and know more about the country.

I feel this opportunity would mean a great deal for my professional and personal growth. I am ready to learn, and I would be very grateful if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project.

Thank you for reading me considering my application, and if I can provide any further information, I would be glad to answer them via my email. address.

I look forward to your response and future contact.

Yours faithfully, Sincerely,

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Hi, Thank you again for helping me ,


spending time supporting it : i wanted to explain that I want to commit to the project for a long time because I applying for a 1 year period of vonlunteering


i have been a third year student at **** University : I want to say that I was a third year student in my University (as it was my last year)


has strengthened my choice of doing an EVS :The fact that it's in this particular country , It made me want to apply (volunteer )even more


is there another way to better formulate those ideas ?

N. B.spending time supporting it :

I read about your organization on your website, which motivated me to contact you and apply for the project "Save the Wild Arctic Reindeer". I'd like to participate for up to a year.

N. B.i have been a third year student at **** University

I recently completed my Bachelor’s Degree at Richland University, majoring in Biology and specializing in Health and Food Science. I completed this degree in three years..

N. B.has strengthened my choice of doing an EVS

Moreover, the fact that this project is in Finland increased my interest in applying as a volunteer in a European Voluntary Service project, as I want to improve my English language skills, immerse myself in Finnish culture and learn more about the country.

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thank you here are the changes /corrections I put on the final product

(i put one of the regions (island)I' live' in as an example because i didn't make good sense indeed!)

Motivation letter to join the ****** Community as a long-term volunteer



Dear Sir/ Madam,

Bonjour, my name is ***** and I am a ***yearold French currently living in ********, *Mayot. I learned about your organization through the European Solidarity Corps database which motivated me to contact you to apply for this project, and I am particularly interested in supporting it.

I have studied at W****X University and I recently completed my Bachelor’s degree in Biology with a specialization in Health and Food Science. Then I decided to take a break from my studies to seek other meaningful pursuits such as working in a full-time job and volunteering.

I found out about the European Voluntary Service program while doing some research, and I got to know more when I took part in the first campaign promoting youth mobility in the country in 2018. Since then, one of my goals has been to get involved in a long-term volunteering project that matched my interests in bio-conservation and the environment because I love being immersed in nature and I have always been environmentally conscious.

I like being active, and I am open to new challenges. I believe in learning by doing, so the idea of volunteering aboard is an opportunity to gain international experiences , to spend quality time with people who share the same interests ,and to bring something new , as much as being useful to others while developing new skills and learning more about myself.

In my free time, I enjoy outdoor activities such as nature photography, visiting the beautiful areas and enjoying the landscapes of *Mayot, and hiking. My other interests include reading, dancing and listening to traditional music, as well as singing and cooking.

I would like to commit to a year’s placement with your organization in order to be helpful to the village while learning more about sustainable agriculture through constructive and practical tasks on the farm. I have a good background in team working since took part in several projects as a student in addition to being a member of a traditional dance team and in an oratory club. I also enjoyed being in an art class which was a way for me to enhance my creativity while exchanging ideas with other foreign students. I am proactive, conscientious, and I would like to use my abilities within the community.

Moreover, the fact that this project is in Finland increased my interest in applying as a volunteer in an European Voluntary Service project, as I want to improve my English language skills, immerse myself in the Finnish culture and know more about the country.

I feel this opportunity would mean a great deal for my professional and personal growth. I am ready to learn, and I would be very grateful if you would give me a chance to contribute to this project.

Thank you for considering my application, and if I can provide any further information, I would be glad to answer them via my email.

I look forward to your response and future contact.

Yours faithfully,

*** **** ************

I don't understand why you insist on reusing the same text even though two of us pointed out to you how you should change it!

I reiterate: you should not use "French" as a noun to refer to a French person. See our other comments and suggestions above.

teechrI don't understand why you insist on reusing the same text even though two of us pointed out to you how you should change it!

Oh, it's just some hard-headed Frenchman (French bulldog?), who indubitably thinks he has a far superior command of English than native speakers. Emotion: sad

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hello , I missunderstood this point because I thought that it was related to fact that I did not indicate my countrie's name ( it is not located in France but we speak French ),and I did not know wether I had the choice to choose between both of your correction on certain parts or not ( for ex, the [strike] , "with the aim of pursuing my education in ..."part and "within the community" part too ) I am really learning how to balance between French and English ...( I am not a bulldog nor insulting anyone )

I am still working on it ( changing the way I present it and maybe adding more mistakes) even though I said it was a final product ( and I am not sure if I can ask other questions )

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