this is my the first time in forum. i try to learn English, but it looks not easy. did i wrote the cover letter correct or not? thank you in advance.

December 1, 2007

Dear Sirs,

Referring to your career opportunity advertisement at Newspapername, dated December 18, 2007, for a job opportunity as a director of firm which sells a bookkeepers' program. I wrote this application letter to your company to be a candidate for that position, which suit with my educational backgrounds, my qualifications and my experience.

My name is Mantas, I am thirty five (35) years old and I graduated from Bookkeepers' collage. In addition to study, my experience also includes working part-time as a programmer in a small company. I got a job in a same sphere firm, after I graduated from university, and quickly learnt enough to become manager. Via hard work, I made my way to the top and now I am Managing Director. I have been working for 10 years deeply involved on the bookkeepers' consult sphere in JSC “xxx”. My main responsible sphere is arranging new and old relations between clients' and employees, coordination of new projects as modernize of bookkeeper's program or install program to a new client. I analyse all results of company, make reports to shareholders and seek new parts of the market as well.

Your offer are familiar to me,and my aspiration is to work for a company that has your excellent reputation. It is my concentration that the combination of my business experience and education is well-suited to the director position you described. I have enclosed a copy of my resume with additional information about my qualifications. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to receiving your reply.

Best regards,


it looks everybody are busy. it is a pity. Emotion: sad
maybe the text too long Emotion: smile
all volunteers have disappeared. it is really pity.
Emotion: sad