The chart illustrates the steps needed to obtain a driving license in the US.

First, the eyesight test is the essential step you need to pass, so that you can participate in written and road exam. In case that you fail the test, you are not capable of getting the driving license. On the other hand, people who pass the eyesight test have to pay fees in order to take the written exam.

The result of the written exam determine which steps people have to take. If they pass this exam, then they can do the road exam immediately. However, people who fail the exam also have two more chances to do it again. But if they fail these two chances, they have to pay fees again to do the written exam. With regard to the road exam, only examinees who pass this test can get the driving license. By contrast, the one who fail the road exam have to pay fees and take both written and road exams again if they want to obtain the driving license.

The flow chart illustrates the steps needed to obtain a driving license in the US.

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The flow chart gives the procedure a person needs to follow in order to get an American drivers license.

Overall, the applicant must go to a testing center. If they do not have good vision, they will not even be allowed to take the exam, which consists of first, a written test, and then a road test. It costs money to get a license.

In detail, when the applicant arrives at the test location, they have to first fill in some application forms. The vision test come next. After proving their visual acuity, they have to pay some fees prior to taking the written exam. They have three chances to pass it. If they fail, they have to start over by paying the fees again, or leave the center without a license. Having succeeded in passing the written test, they go out and are tested on their driving skills. If they fail, they can restart the procedure by paying the fees and going through the written test again. However, when they have been successful in passing both tests, they are awarded a drivers license.