With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.

Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


These days, with the development of technology and medical treatments, some folks insist that society should be responsible for the health care of older people. I believe that this view is true and the government should help elderly people to increase their lifespan.

When people become older, they may suffer from a wide range of diseases and health issues, increasing their time in hospitals and other health care services. In many developed countries, the authorities consider elderly people as important as young adults and they would provide the latest healthcare system for their residences. This may lead to many fundamental consequences, for example in education. Many plans for schools and developing educational facilities have been postponed or even canceled because of this demand on human life. Moreover, the pressure on living standards is increased because many older people must live in suitable areas which can have a great impact on their health.

Potential ways to handle this trend may include the following solutions. First of all, the government should enforce a plan which fulfills elderly people’s needs such as retired money policies, healthcare system. Moreover, authorities should join hands with individuals and public organizations to share the financial burden so they would balance their net spent on different categories which also play an important role in human daily life.

In conclusion, the expenses of aged people can easily be controlled by the government and it would not be burdensome for the society as they introduce many effective ways to make this work.

An Quach development of technology

Human beings have been developing technology since 300,000 years ago when our early ancestors discovered how to chip stones to make hammers and cutting tools..

What kind of "technology" are you referring to? Be specific.

You barely met the minimum word count. You should aim for about 270 words.


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The topic is the growing proportion of elderly people in the country's population, and if the government will be able to provide for their health care.

It is not about the government extending the life expectancy of its citizens.

It is not about society's responsibility.

Most of your writing was off-topic. You must read the instructions very very carefully.


These days, with the development of medicines and better technology and medical treatments, people are living longer now than in previous generations. Some folks (informal.) insist that society should be responsible for the health care of an increasing population of senior citizens. of older people. I believe that this view is true and the government can provide these services to the elderly. should help elderly people to increase their lifespan.

When people become older, they may suffer from a wide range of diseases and health issues, increasing their time in hospitals and other health care services. In many developed countries, (Off-topic. The topic does not ask about developed or developing countries. ) the authorities consider elderly people as important as young adults and they would provide the latest healthcare system for their residences. (A residence is a house.) This may lead to many fundamental consequences, for example in education. (Off-topic. The instructions do not say anything about education.) Many plans for schools and developing educational facilities have been postponed or even canceled because of this demand on human life. Moreover, the pressure on living standards is increased because many older people must live in suitable areas which can have a great impact on their health. (Most of this paragraph is off-topic. )

Potential ways to handle this trend may include the following solutions. First of all, the government should enforce a plan which fulfills elderly people’s needs such as retired money (unnatural phrase) policies, healthcare system. (ungrammatical. Missing conjunction) Moreover, authorities should join hands with individuals and public organizations to share the financial burden so they would balance their net spent on different categories which also play an important role in human daily life.

In conclusion, the expenses of aged people (off-topic) can easily be controlled by the government and it would not be burdensome for the society as they introduce many effective ways to make this work.