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Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the event Skol Sensations, which were extremely disorganized and dangerous.

First of all, the problems started when I decided to buy the tickets. Such a huge price makes you realize that an event of this magnitude is managed by highly skilled people and the attractions are really trendy.

Unfortunately, I was not at home when the tickets arrived and for my surprise, they were simply left in front of my door without any notice which was a shame. Anyway, me and my husband decided to go by taxi in order to avoid getting stuck on traffic and get a good place close to the stage. However, when we arrived at the entrance there was no division and all the people were entering at the same point, which caused many accidents with people being wounded by a furious crowd desperate to get in.

Fortunately, we had not any serious problems. Despite the scary situation, we were frightened that the police did not intervene to calm down the public; actually we were still motivated to watch the DJ´s and have a good time.

When the show started and the lights came out, everything flew well until the moment that I felt like having a beer. If I knew that getting a drink were so hard, I would have brought something to drink inside my purse, mainly because the bars were already ran out of alcohol, a tremendous lack of consideration from the organizers that did not think logistically.

Finally, as the crowd was immensely involved with the music, I felt something heavy pressing my stomach. Suddenly, without any hesitation, an unknown individual was pointing a gun, stealing my purse.

I simply do not understand why the police was not inside the arena and a major tragedy has not occurred with me. Under the circumstances, I feel that a refund should be offered and some measures must be taken and reviewed for the next year.
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Goodness, what a mess!

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your event, Skol Sensations,
which was extremely disorganized and very dangerous.

First of all, the problems started when I decided to buy the tickets.
The price of the ticket would lead one to believe that an event of this
magnitude would managed by highly skilled people and the attractions

would be quite trendy.
I was not at home when the tickets arrived and to my surprise, they were
simply left in front of my door without any notice. That was my first hint.

My husband and I decided to go by taxi in order to avoid getting stuck in traffic and
to get a good place close to the stage. However, when we arrived at the entrance, there was no division. All the people were entering through the same gate, which caused many accidents with people being wounded by a furious crowd desperate to get in.

Fortunately, we had no serious problems. The situation waqs scary. We were frightened that the police did not intervene to calm down the public; actually, we were still motivated to watch the DJ´s and have a good time.

When the show started and the lights were lowered, everything went well until the moment that I felt like having a beer. If I knew that getting a drink were going to be so hard, I would have brought along something to drink, because the bars had already run out of alcohol -- a tremendous lack of consideration from the organizers, who had not thought logistically.

Finally, as the crowd was immensely involved with the music, I felt something heavy pressing my stomach. Suddenly, without hesitation, an unknown individual with a gun pointed at me
stole my purse.

I simply do not understand why the police were not inside the arena. A major tragedy could
easily have occurred with me.
Under the circumstances, I feel that a full refund should be offered me and that some measures
must be taken under consideration and review for the next year.
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dear mr shaw,
thank you very much for your help. I am writing a lot of papers for the cpe.
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