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Could you please take a look at these sentences for me?

1 Overtime/ Over time, we've gotten closer to each other.

2 If there is one year where/that you can't commit to a girl it's your senior year of college. You have to concentrate on school.

3 Is there a number I can reach you on/at

Is there a number where I can reach you.

4 Don't say no to my help. I no you're looking for as much help as you can get.

5 Knowing I'm going to see you is what keeps me going.

6 Keep all your options open/doors open.

7 The more someone wants something from her, the less she will give it.

8 It doesn't need to say in the heading that it's her . I know it's her. I recognize her.

Thank you
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1 Overtime/ Over time, we've gotten closer to each other.
2 If there is one year where/that you can't commit to a girl, it's your senior year of college. You have to concentrate on school.
3 Is there a number I can reach you on/at?
Is there a number where I can reach you?
4 Don't say "no" to my help. I no know you're looking for as much help as you can get.
5 Knowing I'm going to see you is what keeps me going.
6 Keep all your options open/doors open.
7 The more someone wants something from her, the less she will give it.
Or, ..., the less inclined/willing she is to give it.

8 It doesn't need to say in the heading that it's her . I know it's her. I recognize her.

All OK as corrected.

CJ