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Could you please help me correct these sentences I'm having trouble correcting?

1 Keep doing what you are doing/what you do.
2 If he thinks he doesn't need to not make noise when you are sleeping, he's stupid./if not making noise while you are sleeping doesn't come naturally to him, he's stupid.
3 They are up in the sky/skies right now. (in a plane)
4 The lettuce (got) limp as I washed it./as I was washing it.
5 Does your body get the rest it need if you are lying down, eyes closed but not unconscious?
6 I've gotten to a point where even the slightest noise irritates me.
7 If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you read.
8 I was waiting for you to call so I could leave/before leaving.
9 When asked, she says she sleeps less than she actually does.
10 I knew I could beat him the second I saw him play.
11 The door sometimes closes on me when I take the trash out.
12 The elevator is programmed to come back down when not in use.
13 This printer prints darker than that one. There is no ink left in that one.
14 Could you ask the hotel to prolong my stay?
15 When I worked there, if I left my house at quarter to, I'd always arrive on time to work.
16 I was able to turn to the middle/centerfold of the newspaper in one try.

Thank you so much
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1 Keep doing what you are doing/what you do. [both are ok, depending on the context. If you are talking about what someone "does", such as a job, then "what you do" is fine. If it is something the person is doing in the present moment, then "what you are doing" is the correct choice.]

2 If he thinks he doesn't need to not make noise when you are sleeping, he's stupid./if not making noise while you are sleeping doesn't come naturally to him, he's stupid. [This is not clear what you are saying "doesn't need to not" is not easy to understand, and your second sentence seems to mean the opposite. Do you mean he makes noise during sleep, or he doesn't make noise?]

3 They are up in the sky/skies right now. (in a plane)
4 The lettuce went/became limp as I washed it./as I was washing it. [both washed/washing are ok]

5 Does your body get the rest it needs if you are lying down, eyes closed but not unconscious?
6 I've gotten to a point where even the slightest noise irritates me. [ok]

7 If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you read. [ok]

8 I was waiting for you to call so I could leave/before leaving. [both ok - but each has a slightly different sense. The "could" implies some kind of obligation here. "before leaving" is more neutral.]

9 When asked, she says that she sleeps less than she actually does.

10 I knew I could beat him the second I saw him play. [ok]

11 The door sometimes closes on me when I take the trash out. [ok]
12 The elevator is programmed to come back down when not in use. [ok]
13 This printer prints darker than that one. There is no ink left in that one. [ok]
14 Could you ask the hotel to prolong my stay?
15 When I worked there, if I left my house at quarter to, I'd always arrive on time to work. [ok or "...arrive at work on time."]

16 I was able to turn to the middle/centerfold of the newspaper in one try.
Okay, here's my take:

1 Keep doing what you are doing/what you do. (Either)

2 If he thinks he doesn't need to not make noise when you are sleeping, he's stupid./if not making noise while you are sleeping doesn't come naturally to him, he's stupid.
Avoid the negative wording "not make noise."
"If he thinks he doesn't need to keep quiet when you are sleeping, he's stupid." and so forth.

3 They are up in the sky/skies right now. (in a plane)

4 The lettuce (got) limp as I washed it./as I was washing it.
The lettuce became limp as I was washing it. (My preference since you are talking about two parallel processes.)

5 Does your body get the rest it needs if you are lying down, eyes closed, but not unconscious?

6 I've gotten to the a point where even the slightest noise irritates me.

7 If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you can read.
(This assumes that there is something besides handwriting to read. Otherwise this makes no sense.)

8 I was waiting for you to call so I could leave/before leaving.
(Either, as free-spirit says...)

9 When asked, she says that she sleeps less than she actually does.
(If this is a past event only, use "she said.")

10 I knew I could beat him the second I saw him play. (Okay)

11 The door sometimes closes on me when I take the trash out. (Okay)

12 The elevator is programmed to come back down when not in use. (Okay)

13 This printer prints darker than that one. There is no ink left in that one. (Okay)

14 Could you ask the hotel to extend prolong my stay?

15 When I worked there, if I left my house at quarter to, I'd always arrive on time to work.
Clearer when reorganized:
When I worked there, I'd always arrive on time if I'd left my house by a quarter to.

16 I was able to turn to the middle/centerfold of the newspaper in one try.
(Wrong term. A centerfold is a folded insert located at the middle spread of a magazine.)
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THank you Free Spirit and Doctor D,

I had one question for 7.
I'm trying to say "write whatever you think it says" by "write what you read" is that wrong?

Thank you

Ps If you have time would you please help me with this one thread?

http://www.EnglishForward.com/English/CouldCorrectTheseSentences/phrgc/post.htm

Thank you
7. If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you read.

I'm trying to say "write whatever you think it says" by "write what you read" is that wrong?

You could write this a number of ways:

"If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you think it is."
"If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you think it might be."

Informally you can use:

"If you can't read the handwriting, just write down whatever you think it says."

We do use the word "says" for written things. "What does that sign say?" (actually, the sign can't speak Emotion: wink )
Okay, on your #7:

7 If you can't read the handwriting, just write down what you read.

If you are talking about being able to partly read the handwriting, clarify that.

"If you can't read all of the handwriting, just write down what you can read."
Or
"If you can't read the handwriting completely, just write down what you think it means."

And yes, "write what you read" is awkward.
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Thank you so much but one other thing I'd like to ask:

Is this natural:

This printer prints darker than that one.

Thank you
alc24Thank you so much but one other thing I'd like to ask:Is this natural:This printer prints darker than that one.Thank you

Yes.
Yes, but if you want to avoid the awkwardness of "printer prints" you could say:

This printer makes darker copies than that one.
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