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Hi,

Could you check these sentences please?

"This research was conducted at X University of Medical Sciences and was approved by the ethics committee and supported by the Vice-Chancellor for Research. This study was carried out in several steps presented in figure 1."


Thanks!

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Your paragraph. Is OK. Good work!

I like this version a little more.

"This research study was conducted at X University of Medical Sciences, where It was approved by the ethics committee and supported by the Vice-Chancellor for Research. It was carried out in several steps as shown in figure 1."

Clive

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