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Hi,

Could you check the following writing please?

A daily routine of a housewife

Every day that l wake up, l make the bed, make breakfast, feed our dog and take the children to school. My husband takes the bus to his work.

After taking the children, l come back home, vacuum. Back then women used to sweep. Then l feed my baby, iron my husband's clothes & once in a while l sew, too.


Thanks!

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Every day, that [ 1] l wake up, make the bed, make breakfast, feed our dog and take the children to school. My husband takes the bus to his work.

After taking the children to school, l come back home, and vacuum. Back then women used to sweep. Then l feed my baby, iron my husband's clothes and, once in a while, l sew too.

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[ 1]: If you include “that”, you’re suggesting there are days when you don’t wake up!

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My Daily Routine

Every day that l get up at/ at around six. Then, l make the bed. I brush and have bath. I make breakfast, feed my dog, and take my children to school. My husband takes the bus to his work. (This is not part of your daily routine)

After dropping my children at school, l return home and vacuum the house. Then, l feed my baby and iron my husband's clothes.

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