Dear all!

My manager asks me for my training plan. So I'd like to try some course and want to tell how that course is useful for me . Could you please check my English below???

" I'd like to try English course (report writting skill or presentation skill) if you allow me to. As I'm doing seminar for members every month and making presentation sometime. Moreover, I have to write some report to manager if necessary. So I hope it help me."

I think my writing isn't good. If you have better idea please help me.

thanks for your help!

With best wishes,

chaw su
" I'd like to try [take an] English course (report writing skills or presentation skills) if you allow me to, as I'm doing a seminar for members every month and making presentations sometimes. Moreover, I have to write some reports to managers where necessary. So I hope it help me."
Avoid "try" - it might seem to your manager that you are not committed to doing the course.
End on a strong positive note.
Hi Feebs11!

Thank you so much for your help. Now I can send mail to my manager in time with your help.

I'm looking forward your help next time.

Thanks again!

With best wishes,

Chaw Su