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Countries are nowadays able to export goods and products easily due to the high qualification means of transportations. This can be concerned as an outstanding development of the economy of the world when all countries have strong connections. In my perspective, people now can buy and use several products from other countries is a positive development, it brings back lots of advantages.

First of all, it is noticeable that people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world is a sign of the extraordinary improvement of exportation and importation. Due to the development of transportation, countries are able to exchange their products easily and conveniently. This also means that the economy is now rising more and more, which enhances the living standard of the citizens.

Secondly, it is undeniable that having the opportunity to try the products of different countries is an advantage. People can achieve more experiences from testing different products of others countries, which helps them to create a comparison among these products and chose the highest qualification to use. Furthermore, people are also able to diversity the products due to they have massive options of goods. This improves their living standard because people do not have to stick with using one type of product for a long period, they could change to others, which might have better qualifications. Moreover, it is impossible for people to try products which are reviewed are the best products or the significant products of that countries.

In summary, people are now able to buy lots of goods from other countries without actually going there is concerned as absolute advantage. It brings a lot of conveniences and also improving the living standard. Furthermore, this is also a sign to show that the economy is developing rapidly, the distance among countries all over the world is now no longer a concerning problem.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because ppl are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?


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Countries are nowadays able to export goods and products easily due to the high qualification (wrong phrase) means of transportations. (wrong form - transportation is non-count.) This can be concerned (wrong word ) as an outstanding development of the economy of the world when all countries have strong connections. In my perspective, people now can buy and use several products from other countries is a (ungrammatical. the verb "is" is lacking a subject.) positive development, (Ungrammatical sentence - comma splice error) it brings many back lots of advantages.

First of all, it is noticeable that people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world is a (ungrammatical. the verb "is" is lacking a subject.) sign of the extraordinary growth improvement of exportation and importation. Due to the development of transportation, countries are able to exchange their products easily and conveniently. This also means that the economy is continually now rising more and more, which improves enhances (wrong word ) the living standard of living of the citizens.

Secondly, Second, it is undeniable that having the opportunity to try the products of different countries is an advantage. People can achieve (wrong word ) enjoy the more experiences from of testing different products of others (wrong form) countries, which helps them to create (wrong word ) make a comparisons among these products and chose the highest qualification (wrong phrase) best one to use. Furthermore, people are also able to diversity the products (wrong phrase - it makes no sense. I do not know what you mean.) due to they have many choices massive options of goods. This improves their living standard of living because people do not have to stick with using one type of product for a long period, they could change to others, (no comma) which have more features or are more durable or less expensive. might have better qualifications. Moreover, it is impossible for people to try products which are reviewed are the best products or the significant products of that countries. (Ungrammatical sentence - I do not understand it. The clause structure is non-English.)

In summary, people are now able to buy lots of goods from other countries without actually going there is (ungrammatical. the verb "is" is lacking a subject.) concerned (wrong word) as absolute advantage. It brings a lot of conveniences and also improving (wrong form) the living standard of living. Furthermore, this is also a sign to show that the economy is developing rapidly, (Ungrammatical sentence - comma splice error) the distance among countries all over the world is now no longer a concerning problem.

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Topic: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

My essay:

Countries are nowadays able to export goods and products easily due to the high qualification means of transportations. This can be concerned as an outstanding development of the economy of the world when all countries have strong connections. In my perspective, people now can buy and use several products from other countries is a positive development, it brings back lots of advantages.

First of all, it is noticeable that people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world is a sign of the extraordinary improvement of exportation and importation. Due to the development of transportation, countries are able to exchange their products easily and conveniently. This also means that the economy is now rising more and more, which enhances the living standard of the citizens.

Secondly, it is undeniable that having the opportunity to try the products of different countries is an advantage. People can achieve more experiences from testing different products of others countries, which helps them to create a comparison among these products and chose the highest qualification to use. Furthermore, people are also able to diversity the products due to they have massive options of goods. This improves their living standard because people do not have to stick with using one type of product for a long period, they could change to others, which might have better qualifications. Moreover, it is impossible for people to try products which are reviewed are the best products or the significant products of that countries.

In summary, people are now able to buy lots of goods from other countries without actually going there is concerned as absolute advantage. It brings a lot of conveniences and also improving the living standard. Furthermore, this is also a sign to show that the economy is developing rapidly, the distance among countries all over the world is now no longer a concerning problem.


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