Hello everyone could you please let me know what you think of my cover letter for an internship ??? any suggestion??
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_Organisation, creativity, commitment and flexibility are all skills i do not lack._

I am currently in my final year as a student in Business Management and Administration at XXXXXXXX University in Italy, and I would like to be considered for a summer 2008 internship position at XXXXXXXX.
I have a vivid interest in film production and throughout my studies and work experiences i shaped this interest more and more.

During business school, I have developed skills that are directly applicable to the work. My academic background includes courses that range from finance to business management, from marketing to public relations. Moreover I had the chance to live and study in Los Angeles for more than 6 months at the renowned Marshall Business School at the University of Southern California, where I deepened my knowledge of the entertainment industry. Film Production and Distribution, Entertainment Law were among the courses I took.
Besides my academic background I also have more direct experiences in this business thanks to my internships at talent agencies where I worked in close contact with agents, casting directors and producers.

It is my belief that I could contribute effectively as a member of your program, which in turn would allow me to continue to pursue my interests and future academic career. I consider this internship an ideal opportunity to obtain hands-on experience.

I enclose a recent curriculum vitae for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,
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Iam currently in my final year as a student in Business Management andAdministration at *** University in Italy, and I would like to beconsidered for a summer 2008 internship position at ***. I have a keen interest in film production and throughout my studies and work experiences, I have continued to shape this interest.

Duringbusiness school, I have developed skills that are directly applicableto this work. My academic background includes courses infinance, business management, marketing and public relations. I also had the chance to live and study in Los Angeles for morethan six months at the renowned Marshall Business School at theUniversity of Southern California, where I deepened my knowledge of theentertainment industry. Film Production & Distribution and EntertainmentLaw were among the courses I took. Besides my academic background, Ialso have more direct experience in this business, holdinginternships at talent agencies, where I worked in close contact withagents, casting directors and producers.

It is my belief that Icould contribute effectively as a member of your program, while in turnit would allow me to continue to pursue my interests and future academiccareer. I consider this internship an ideal opportunity to obtainhands-on experience.

I enclose a recent curriculum vitae for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,
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