I would be glad if anyone could correct my proposal, comments are more than welcome! Thank's a lot!!

To: Headmaster

Subject: Suggestions for a better use of money

INTRODUCTION

The aim of this proposal is to furnish some suggestions on how to exploit the funding our college has been given, by taking into consideration the most urgent needs.

FOCUSING ON WEAKNESSES

Outstanding and valuable students are a proud tradition at Girton College.

Although great effort and reliability is put into the teaching system, very little is done for the college environment. A substantial lack of facilities has to be remarked: classrooms are barely equipped, the multimedia lab is old-fashioned and computers work really slowly, afternoon activities are uninteresting and badly organised.

IMPROVEMENTS

New afternoon clubs should be set off in order to encourage students to take part in school life more actively. This is both a good way to teach youngsters cooperation team working and to develop personal skills.

The football and volleyball teams ought to be provided with better equipment and training pitches. One of the school’s priorities should be furnishing computer science classes with a more updated apparatus: new computers are essential, in fact.

A cafeteria would be a nice investment for our college since there is no place to relax, read and study.

Moreover we, the students, suggest organising a weekly students’ gazette to discuss the most striking issues of nowadays society.

CONCLUSION

Girton College has been given the opportunity to improve.

The above outlined idea will hopefully lead to a refreshed friendly environment.

It is common opinion that not only will students benefit form the changes, but also many more new applicants will be attracted by the sparkling atmosphere. Likewise this all will help our college to keep up with 21st century culture and make the study experience much more pleasant.
Subject: Suggestions for better use of budget

INTRODUCTION

The aim of this proposal is to furnish some suggestions on how to exploit the funding our college has been given, by taking into consideration the most urgent needs.

FOCUSING ON WEAKNESSES

(Outstanding and valuable students are a proud tradition at Girton College. how is this a weakness? And you mean 'valued' not valuable)

Although great effort is put into the teaching system, very little is done for the college environment. A substantial lack of facilities has to be remarked upon: classrooms are barely equipped, the multimedia lab is old-fashioned and the computers work really slowly, afternoon activities are uninteresting and badly organised.

IMPROVEMENTS

New afternoon clubs should be established in order to encourage students to take part in school life more actively. This is a good way to both teach youngsters cooperative working and to develop personal skills.

The football and volleyball teams ought to be provided with better equipment and training pitches. One of the school’s priorities should be furnishing the computer science classes with more up-to-date equipment: new computers are essential, in fact.

A cafeteria would be a nice investment for our college since there is no place to relax, read and study.

Moreover we, the students, suggest organising a weekly students’ gazette to discuss the most striking issues of today's society.

CONCLUSION

Girton College has been given the opportunity to improve.

The ideas outlined above would lead to a fresher and friendly environment.

It is common opinion that not only would current students benefit from the changes, but that many more new applicants would be attracted. Likewise this would all help our college to keep up with 21st century culture and make the study experience much more pleasant.
Thank you very much indeed for your reply!:)
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In hindsight, had I learned more about citizenship, religious and environmental education, I would probably be more prepared for life and society.

When I was a young kid, I used to learn about these subjects in a very superficial and methodical way. Actually, in a world without computers and mobile phones, such matters might be a little bit boring in comparison with the latest developments presented to pupils today.

Take citizenship for instance whose meaning has been extremely important in the world we live in. Had I known that such a topic was so vital today, I would never be absent during the social studies class. Honestly, only after writing on the notebook did I remember that I had forgotten the content. Unfortunately I did not take the volunteering work so seriously, just because of the boring teachers that I had in that time and as a result I probably became an unvalued citizen.

On the other hand, the religion always was surrounded every young pupil during the school years. Such was the force of the topic that it was taught in class at least once a day, even in house. Despite the discipline required to assimilate the content, I had to admit to my colleagues nowadays that the content taught in class was not so well managed, due to the diversity of beliefs and religions that have been shown to people.

Finally, the environmental topics were introduced according the level of destruction that the planet was suffering. I was warned a thousand times that our planet could be destroyed in a very short term if we were negligent. Frankly, I thought, as did my teachers at school, that the deforestation would soon be over – 25 years ago. All in all, never have I heard about a possible way of preserving our place and home in order to be eco-friendly and socially correct. In fact, I believe that the school has owed such attitudes to me.