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Could you please correct the mistakes in the following CV?

Name:XXX

Date of birth:X/X/X

Marital status: single

Email:X

Phone number:******

Adress: XXX


Education

I studied at X High school from 2010 to 2013 and started to study at University of X, English Department (I think it must be Department of English). I am a college graduate.


Personal statement/Profile

I'm a hard working individual who enjoys working and eager to absorb knowledge in my job as much as possible. I'm also a serious and punctual person. Although I enjoy reading books. Especially, psychology because it helps me dig deeper into humans mind and how to behave with people


Experience

I translated a book in 2021 for a publisher called "Rosa". I was recruited as a teacher at X School for the school year 2017/2018. In the years 2018 and 2019, I worked as a lecturer for learning English language at X for Human Development (it was an organisation) worked as a lecturer for an organisation for learning English named "X" in the years 2018 and 2019. In 2018-2019, I completed 30 hours of online course about law awareness. In 2019/2020, I was a lecturer at an English language course.

Skills

I have skills in "translating books, teaching, problem solving, flexibility, teamwork, responsibility, computer, and psychology intelligence.

Languages

English advanced

Persian advanced

Arabic intermediate

P.S. This CV has been written by someone. I think there are mistakes in it. I appreciate your help.

Best wishes,

Joseph

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Name:XXX

Date of birth:X/X/X

Marital status: single

Email:X

Phone number:******

Address: XXX

Education

I studied at X High school from 2010 to 2013 and started to study at University of X, English Department (I think it must be Department of English). I am a college graduate. [ 1]

Personal statement/Profile

I'm a hard-working, punctual individual who enjoys working and is eager to absorb acquire knowledge in my field. job as much as possible. I'm also a serious and punctual person. Although I enjoy reading books, especially about psychology because it that helps me dig deeper have a better understanding of into humans mind and how to behave with what motivates people

Experience

I translated a book in 2021 for a publisher called [ 2] "Rosa". ….

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[ 1]: That is vague. Did they finish the university program and graduate with an official qualification? If so, provide details. If not, explain why.

[ 2]: Is Rosa the name of the book or the name of the publisher?

The rest needs to be structured (bullet points + details). Also, avoid waffle/generic stuff (e.g. computer skills). A good CV should specify what particular computer skills a person has.

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teechrDid they finish the university program and graduate with an official qualification? If so, provide details.

Yes, she finished university and now she has a bachelor's degree in English.


teechr[ 2]: Is Rosa the name of the book or the name of the publisher?

As far as I know, it is the name of the publisher.

Thank you.

I hope you help me more.

teechrDid they finish the university program and graduate with an official qualification? If so, provide details.
To be more clear, she finished high school. Then, she was admitted into X university/College of Language/English Department. After studying there for four years, she finished education and gained a bachelor's degree in English.
teechr[ 1]: That is vague. Did they finish the university program and graduate with an official qualification? If so, provide details. If not, explain why.[ 2]: Is Rosa the name of the book or the name of the publisher?The rest needs to be structured (bullet points + details). Also, avoid waffle/generic stuff (e.g. computer skills). A good CV should specify what particular computer skills a person has.

Teecher, the following is the amended version. I removed the unnecessary details. Could you please comment on it?

Name:XXX

Date of birth:17/1/1996

Marital status: single

Email:X

Phone number:******

Address: XXX


Personal statement/Profile

I'm a hard-working, punctual individual who is eager to acquire knowledge in my field. I enjoy reading books, especially about psychology because that helps me have a better understanding of what motivates people


Education

I studied at X High school from 2010 to 2013. In 2013, I was admitted into University of Sulaimani/College of Language/English Department. In 2017, I got a bachelor's degree.

Experience

I translated a book for Rosa Publisher in 2021. I was recruited/employed as a teacher at X School for the school year 2017/2018. In the years 2018 and 2019, I worked as a lecturer for learning English language at X for Human Development (it was an organisation) worked as a lecturer for an organisation for learning English named "X" in the years 2018 and 2019. In 2018-2019, I completed 30 hours of online course about law awareness. In 2019/2020, I was a lecturer at an English language course.

Computer skills

Microsoft Word ..... very good

Microsoft Excel ..... very good


Languages

Kurdish......native language

English .....advanced

Persian...... advanced

Arabic .........intermediate

Best wishes,

Joseph

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Name:XXX

Date of birth:17/1/1996

Marital status: single

Email:X

Phone number:******

Address: XXX

Personal statement / Profile

I'm a hard-working, punctual individual who is eager to acquire knowledge in my field. I enjoy reading books, especially about psychology because that helps me have a better understanding of what motivates people

Education

I studied at X High school from 2010 to 2013. In 2013, I was admitted into University of Sulaimani/College of Language/English Department. In 2017, I got graduated with a bachelor's degree from University of Sulaimani/College of Language/English Department.

Experience

I translated a book for Rosa Publisher in 2021. I was recruited/employed as a teacher at X School for the school year 2017/2018. In the years 2018 and 2019, I worked as an English lecturer for learning English language at X for Human Development. I also (it was an organisation) worked as an English lecturer for an organisation for learning English named "X" in the years 2018 and 2019. In 2018-2019, I completed a 30-hour of course online course about law awareness. In 2019/2020, I was a lecturer at an English language centre. course.

Computer skills

Microsoft Word ..... very good

Microsoft Excel ..... very good

Languages

Kurdish...… native language

English ..… near proficient advanced

Persian...... advanced

Arabic ......… intermediate

teechrEnglish Department.

Thank you so much, teechr.

Last year, I posted a CV. You wrote "Department of Nursing" instead of "Nursing Department". You taught me that "Translation Department" is also wrong. It should be "Department of Translation". So, isn't "English Department" wrong? Must it be "Department of English"?

Regards,

Joseph

Joseph ASo, isn't "English Department" wrong? Must Shouldn't it be "Department of English"?

Either is possible.

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teechr
Joseph ASo, isn't "English Department" wrong? Must Shouldn't it be "Department of English"?

Either is possible.

Thank you so much, teechr🌺.