Dear all,

Haven't been here for ages but still remember the help of the forum (esp. Mountainhiker) for my motivation letter 2 years ago. I have been admitted to the desired university, and I need the forum's help again.

Now I'm applying for a short internship in a management department of a famous fashion company. I'll strat with CV. Please, could someone comment it or suggest any improvements (even tiny ones as bullet points or paragraph settings)? See the file attached (I can send the doc-version if needed).

Thank you very much in advance.

SGirl
Have looked at your cv: looks good. However, needing correction:

Feb/Sept 2005 potentional customers and rivals

June/Aug 2006 for the largest Ford center

Interests: Organizing and participating in

Feebs11, thank you very much!

SGirl.

P.S. For those who are interested in the further CV comments, look here: http://www.EnglishForward.com/English/Intership/dxlxk/Post.htm (you need to scroll 'till the very end, sorry).