In recent years, riding a bike is a more effective way of protecting the environment than using any other types of vehicles. Personally, there are a number of reasons for this trend and some solutions could be proposed to promote the usage of bicycles.
There are two important reasons why few people use bicycles to travel on a regular basis. Firstly, due to the hectic life, life is getting much busier than in the past, individuals nowadays want to save time traveling by other types of transport more than ride a bike on their own. Therefore, they prefer to use other things such as: motorbike, car. Secondly, cycling is more energy consuming than riding a motorbike or driving a car. Furthermore, this tends to discourage people from choosing this method, especially on a bad weather day or when they have to travel long distances
However, there are several actions that can be taken to solve this problem. The first solution would be to impose a higher task on fuel prices, which would discourage many people from using cars. Once the tax is imposed, individuals would rather use bicycles as a way for saving money. Additionally, more lanes should be built to serve cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel with bicycles. Secondly, launching campaigns to raise citizens awareness of the harmful effects of motorbikes and cars on the environment could encourage people to cycle.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why bicycles are becoming less common in today’s world, and solutions should be produced early to promote this environmentally friendly means of transport.
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In recent years, (I don't think that it is different now than it was 50 years ago. Do not memorize phrases that do not make sense. ) riding a bike is a more effective way of protecting the environment than using any other types of vehicles. Personally, there are a number of reasons for this trend (What trend are you talking about? A "trend" is something that is increasing or decreasing. You did not mention any trend.) and some solutions actions could be proposed to promote the usage of bicycles.
You did not answer both essay prompts, only the second one. You must address both of them in the introduction.
1. Why is it not popular in many places?
2, How can we increase its popularity?
There are two important reasons why few people use bicycles to travel on a regular basis. Firstly, First, due to their hectic life, life is getting much busier than in the past, (That is redundant. Hectic means "busier." Avoid needless repetition. ) individuals nowadays want to save time by traveling by other types of transport such as trains, buses and motorbikes. more than ride a bike on their own. Therefore, they prefer to use other things such as: motorbike, car. Secondly, Second, cycling requires physical exertion, unlike more energy consuming (Energy consuming in this context means using fossil fuels.) than riding a motorbike or driving a car. Furthermore, this tends to discourage people from choosing this method, especially it is impractical to cycle on a bad weather day or when they have to travel long distances (Missing punctuation)
However, there are several actions that can be taken to encourage more people to cycle. solve this problem. (You never wrote about a problem. What is the problem?) The first solution would be to impose a higher task (wrong word) on fuel prices, which would discourage many people from using cars. Once the tax is imposed, individuals would rather use bicycles as a way for saving money. Additionally, more lanes should be built to serve cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel by bicycle. with bicycles. Secondly, launching campaigns to raise citizens awareness of the harmful effects of motorbikes and cars on the environment could persuade encourage people to cycle.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why bicycles are becoming less common (That is not the topic. Lots of kids have bicycles. They get bikes for their birthday. ) in today’s world, and solutions should be produced (wrong word) early to promote this environmentally-friendly means of transport.