I had given a topic sentence and asked to write a paragraph to support the topic sentence. I did my best now needs your review. Hope you won't disappoint me. Thanks.
Miss Sadaf speaks English. (that is the topic sentence) Her English is as fluent as of a native speaker. Her English pronunciations are so good. To improve her English speaking skill she did much hard work. She always read English books. She listened to English programs on t.v and radio watched English movies and joined some English Forums on internet that added much to her knowledge about English language. Besides, she did some English language courses, too.
Miss Sadaf speaks English. (that is the topic sentence) Her English is as fluent as of a native speaker. Her English pronunciations are so good. To improve her English speaking skill she did much hard work. She always read English books. She listened to English programs on t.v and radio watched English movies and joined some English Forums on internet that added much to her knowledge about English language. Besides, she did some English language courses, too.
Miss Sadaf speaks English. (that is the topic sentence) Her English is as fluent as of a native speaker. Her English pronunciations are so good. To improve her English speaking skill she did much hard work. She always read English books. She listened to English programs on t.v and radio watched English movies and joined some English Forums on internet that added much to her knowledge about English language. Besides, she did some English language courses, too.
Miss Sadaf speaks English. (that is the topic sentence) Her English is as fluent as a native speaker's. Her pronunciation is very good. To improve her English speaking skills, she did a lot of hard work. She always read English books. She listened to English programs on t.v and radio, watched English movies and joined some English Forums on the internet that added a lot to her knowledge . Besides, she did some English language courses.
Ask about any edits you don't understand.
Much' is not wrong here, but 'a lot of' is more natural.
Clive
Miss Sadaf speaks English. (that is the topic sentence) Her English is as fluent as a native speaker's. Her pronunciation is very good. To improve her English speaking skills, she did a lot of hard work. She always read English books. She listened to English programs on t.v and radio, watched English movies and joined some English Forums on the internet that added a lot to her knowledge . Besides, she did some English language courses.
Ask about any edits you don't understand.
Much' is not wrong here, but 'a lot of' is more natural.
Clive
Comments
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how has Sadaf learnt English?
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why does Sadaf speak English so well?
so on.
You're welcome!
Clive