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LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION

I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for my student, Mr. XYZ who is aspiring to pursue his graduate studies in your esteemed institution. I have known him for more than three years as a student of the Department of Electronics and Instrumentation Engineering and have been floored by his zest for knowledge.

I had taught him the courses “Computer Control of Processes” and “Digital Signal Processing” and found him to be a gifted student of the same. He had very high grasping prowess and took part actively in many class-room discussions. His tendency to go beyond the required course-work to enrich him is praiseworthy. While I have seen him improve steadily over the years as a student, I have also seen in him a craving to get better. He is forever ready to learn, correct himself, accept authority and is, above all, humble.

He is a very responsible and diligent student with sufficient motivation to excel in his chosen field of studies. I have seen a keen urge in him to understand engineering concepts beyond the theoretical purview reflecting his potential for research. Besides academics, he showed a keen interest in computers and Environmental factors. His good general knowledge and analytical skills are noteworthy. He can express himself fluently in English and communicates very well with all people.

I strongly believe that he will make a name for himself in your prestigious institution and strongly recommend him for the graduate program with full financial assistance and wish him all the best for his future endeavors.

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I am glad to write this letter of recommendation on XYZ, a graduate student in the Department of Electronics & Instrumentation Engineering. I have handled lectures for his class in a course on ‘Basic civil engineering’ during one semester and so I have had ample opportunity to assess him.

XYZ has had a good academic record throughout the course, and is an excellent student showing good analytical skills at course. Whilst assessing his class assignment submissions on Environmental Studies, I have observed him to exhibit a propensity for deep analysis and understanding and a very good engagement of his intellectual faculties. He is systematic and organized at work. He has shown a more than reasonable attitude for research ability.

In my considered opinion, XYZ is a well qualified and deserving candidate for higher studies. Accordingly, I strongly recommend him for graduate studies at a university of his choice with full financial assistance.
A bit too verbose. It needs some paring. Try this:

LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION

I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for my student, Mr XYZ who wishes to pursue graduate studies at your institution. I have known him for more than three years as a student of the Department of Electronics and Instrumentation Engineering and have been impressed by his zest for knowledge.

I taught him in the courses “Computer Control of Processes” and “Digital Signal Processing” and found him to be a gifted student. He had a quick grasp of the material and took part actively in classroom discussions. He went beyond the required coursework to enrich himself. I have seen him improve steadily over the years as a student, always striving to excel. He is always eager to learn and correct himself; he accepts authority and is, above all, humble.

He is a very responsible and diligent student, with sufficient motivation to excel in his chosen field. He has a keen urge to understand practical engineering concepts beyond the theoretical, reflecting his potential for research. Besides academics, he has an avid interest in computers and environmental concerns. His good general knowledge and analytical skills are noteworthy. He can express himself fluently in English and communicates very well with people.

I strongly believe that he will make a name for himself in your institution, and I strongly recommend him for the graduate program with full financial assistance and wish him all the best in his future endeavors.

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I am glad to write this letter of recommendation for XYZ, a graduate student in the Department of Electronics & Instrumentation Engineering. I lectured in his course on Basic Civil Engineering, so I have had ample opportunity to assess his abilities.

XYZ has had a good academic record throughout the course and is an excellent student, showing good analytical skills. Whilst assessing his class submissions on Environmental Studies, I observed that he had a propensity for in-depth analysis, a good understanding of the subject, and a full engagement of his intellectual faculties. He is systematic and organized at work and has shown a predilection for research.

In my considered opinion, XYZ is a well-qualified and deserving candidate for advanced study. Accordingly, I strongly recommend him for graduate studies at the university of his choice with full financial assistance.
Dear Mister Micawber, Thanks for ur reply.. i'll b always grateful to u.. thanks a lot..
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Actually i am an engineering Graduate(Bachelor of Technology in Electronics and Instrumentation Engg) but i want to study non-technical courses like M.Sc in public Health Masters.. Can u modify the above two SOP's so that it looks like a suitable SOP for non-technical courses..I mean, i want to add some strong points to impress the selectors..I want some sentences which really shows my eagerness towards non-Technical courses..since i am from Engineering Background, i am really scared whether they will grant me admission for non-technical course.. Please help me out..
Your letters are fine as they are. If you wish to add something else, please do so, and someone here will check it for you.
Hai mister micawber, Thanx for ur reply.. if u can, pls tell me some tips.. thanx in advance..
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Dear Sir, i have done chemical enigneering. I wanat to get higher education in this regard i feel difficulty in writting recommendation letter. plz send me letter. I'll be very thankfull to you.
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