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Dear Mr. Eric Gill,

I would like to express my interest in the PhD position in "Linearly implicit methods for simulation" inthe AH research center, in [sity] , In [country].

I am particularly eager to apply for this PhD position, because it is consistent with my academicbackground and my interest.The first and most important irritants that motivates me to apply for thisdoctoral program is my expertise in numerical analysis. Thanks to the rapid progress and success in theMaster's degree, It is clear that studying and researching in this field is one of the efforts I want to domore.

While studying for my BSc in Mathematics at the *** University in [country], I took a course in NumericalAnalysis, which motivated me to continue my studies in this area. Thereafter, I was admitted to the*** University, [city] branch, for my MSc in Applied Mathematics- Numerical Analysis. Since Ifound a strong interest in numerical simulation and solution of problems in the other fields, especiallyin physics, with using Mathematical algorithms, and found it is very important and exciting, I have donemy Master's project in physics area. My Master's thesis under the supervision of Dr. Rab, was on"Using mathematical techniques for solving Fokker-Planck equations", and I successfully completed. On the other hand, courses such as NumericalAnalysis, Advanced Numerical Analysis(1), Numerical Methods for Ordinary Differential Equation, and Numerical Solution for Integral Equations, with excellent grades, which are prerequisites and completelyrelated to linearly implicit methods, gave me deeper knowledge to do your project.

Doing a PhD project at the Inria department is an opportunity that I would like to dedicate,wholeheartedly, and I hope to contribute to the scientific community in the best possible way while I amin [city]. So It would be great honour to be able work in a research environment and academicenvironment under the guidance of eminent professors, especially Mr. Gill.

I am eager to gain new experience, improve my skills, and expand my understanding of linearly implicitmethods, and a PhD project in this area can be quite effective. I strongly believe that my academic background and my deep concern in this field of research have made me a very good condidate to dothis program in the best possible way and I will be able to meet and even exceed your expectations. After completing the PhD, I intend to pursue a postdoc in Numerical Analysis.

I hope this letter provide insight into my comment to my learning.

Thank you so much for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,

Mari Mi
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I thought you were applying for Bayesian sampling - I gave you a lot of feedback on your earlier posts. I will only highlight the most severe errors. Your letter is not very convincing. You make a lot of claims but you need to provide more concrete evidence for them.

Dear Mr. Eric Gill,

I would like to express my interest in the PhD position in "Linearly implicit methods for simulation" inthe AH research center, in [sity] , In [country].

I am particularly eager to apply for this PhD position, because it is consistent with my academicbackground and my interest.The first and most important irritants (An irritant is something that hurts. Smoke and pollution is an irritant to the eyes.) that motivates me to apply for thisdoctoral program is my expertise in numerical analysis. Thanks to the rapid progress and success That makes no sense. in theMaster's degree, It is clear that studying and researching in this field is one of the efforts I want to domore.

While studying for my BSc in Mathematics at the *** University in [country], I took a course in NumericalAnalysis, which motivated me to continue my studies in this area. Thereafter, I was admitted to the*** University, [city] branch, for my MSc in Applied Mathematics- Numerical Analysis. Since Ifound a strong interest in numerical simulation and solution of problems in the other fields, especiallyin physics, with using Mathematical algorithms, and found it is very important and exciting, I have donemy Master's project in physics area. My Master's thesis under the supervision of Dr. Rab, was on"Using mathematical techniques for solving Fokker-Planck equations", and I successfully completed. On the other hand, courses such as NumericalAnalysis, Advanced Numerical Analysis(1), Numerical Methods for Ordinary Differential Equation, and Numerical Solution for Integral Equations, with excellent grades, which are prerequisites and completelyrelated to linearly implicit methods, gave me deeper knowledge to do your project.

Doing a PhD project at the Inria department is an opportunity that I would like to dedicate,wholeheartedly, and I hope to contribute to the scientific community in the best possible way while I amin [city]. So It would be great honour to be able work in a research environment and academicenvironment under the guidance of eminent professors, especially Mr. Gill.

I am eager to gain new experience, improve my skills, and expand my understanding of linearly implicitmethods, and a PhD project in this area can be quite effective. I strongly believe that my academic background and my deep concern in this field of research have made me a very good condidate to dothis program in the best possible way and I will be able to meet and even exceed your expectations. After completing the PhD, I intend to pursue a postdoc in Numerical Analysis.

I hope this letter provide insight into my comment to my learning.

Thank you so much for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,

Mari Mi

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Dear teacher,
Thank you for your patience and cooperation and thank you so much for your kind feedback on my motivation letter.
I apply for any PhD position that fits with my background and my interest.
Requirements for applying for this position is a Master degree in Applied Mathematics - Numerical Analysis. In fact, in the description of this PhD project it is mentioned that the keys to success are taste for applied mathematics and in particular for numerical analysis, based on strong knowledge at Master level will be very useful to the applicant.
Also, the background for the linearly implicit methods is to know the methods that I learnedin Master's degree and the courses that I have mentioned, that is why.

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Dear Mr. Eric Gill,

I would like to express my interest in the PhD position in "Linearly implicit methods for simulation" in the AH research center, in [sity] , In [country].

I am particularly eager to apply for this PhD position, because it is consistent with my academic background and my interest. The first and most important driver force that motivates me to apply for this doctoral program is my studied and experience in numerical analysis. Thanks to the methods I have learned for ordinary differential equations and integral equations, It is clear that studying and researching in this field is one of the efforts I want to do more.

While studying for my BSc in Mathematics Education at the *** University in [country], I took a course in Numerical Analysis, which motivated me to continue my studies in this area. Thereafter, I was admitted to the*** University, [city] branch, for my MSc in Applied Mathematics- Numerical Analysis. Since I found a strong interest in numerical simulation and numerical approximation of the solutions of problems in other fields, especially in physics, with using Mathematical algorithms, and found it is very important and exciting, I have done my Master's project in physics. My Master's thesis under the supervision of Dr. Rab, was on"Using mathematical techniques for solving Fokker-Planck equations", which is a parabolic partial differential equation appearing in the electromechanical system with a one degree of freedom. Furthermore, I took courses such as Numerical Analysis, Advanced Numerical Analysis (I), Numerical Methods for Ordinary Differential Equations, and Numerical Solution for Integral Equations, with excellent grades, which are prerequisites and completely related to linearly implicit methods, gave me deeper knowledge to do your project.

Doing a PhD project at the AH department is an opportunity that I would like to dedicate, wholeheartedly, and I hope to contribute to the scientific community in the best possible way while I am in [city]. So it would be great honour to be able to work in a research environment and academic environment under the supervision of eminent scientist like you.

I am eager to gain new experience, improve my skills, and expand my understanding of linearly implicit methods, and a PhD project in this area can be quite effective. I strongly believe that my academic background and my deep concern in this field of research have made me a very good applicant to do this program in the best possible way and I will be able to meet and even exceed your expectations. After completing the PhD, I intend to pursue a postdoc in Numerical Analysis.

I hope this letter provides insight into my commitment to my learning.

Thank you so much for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,

Mari Mi
Monamiinterest

Generally we use the plural form for "interest" because most people have more than one.

Dear Mr. Eric Gill,

I would like to express my interest in the PhD position in "Linearly implicit methods for simulation" in the AH research center, in [sity] , In [country].

I am particularly eager to apply for this PhD position, because it is consistent with my academic background and my interests. The first and most important driver force that motivates me to apply for this doctoral program is my studied (Studied is a verb. You cannot use it as a noun.) and experience in numerical analysis. Thanks to the methods I have learned for ordinary differential equations and integral equations, It (punctuation error) is clear (Why is it clear? Can you explain?) that studying and researching in this field is one of the efforts (wrong word) I want to do more.

While studying for my BSc in Mathematics Education at the *** University in [country], I took a course in Numerical Analysis, which piqued my interest because of its practical applications in engineering and I decided to focus ... motivated me (repetitious. Also, "motivation is really general and unspecific. Why in particular did you make this decision. I just made a guess to give you an example of being more specific.) to continue my studies in this area. Thereafter, I was admitted to the*** University, [city] branch, for my MSc in Applied Mathematics- Numerical Analysis. Since I found a strong interest in numerical simulation and numerical approximation of the solutions of problems in other fields, especially in physics, with using Mathematical algorithms, (Mathematical is not a proper adjective.) and found it is very important and exciting, (In what particular ways did you find it exciting? Be specific.) I have done my Master's project in physics. My master's thesis under the supervision of Dr. Rab, was on"Using mathematical techniques for solving Fokker-Planck equations", which is a parabolic partial differential equation appearing in the electromechanical systems (I assume that there is more than one particular system with this property. Can you give a specific example?) with a one degree of freedom. Furthermore, I took courses such as Numerical Analysis, (You already mentioned this as your primary focus. "furthermore" means additional courses besides the major.) Advanced Numerical Analysis (I), Numerical Methods for Ordinary Differential Equations, and Numerical Solution for Integral Equations, with excellent grades, (Can you give your GPA for these courses as evidence for your statement?). The courses are directly which are prerequisites and completely related to your project on linearly implicit methods, so I am confident that I have the prerequisite background and me deeper knowledge to make significant contributions to do your project. (Give a brief explanation of how you can apply your specific knowledge to the goals of this project.)

Doing a PhD project at the AH department is an opportunity that I would like to dedicate, wholeheartedly, and I hope to contribute to the scientific community in the best possible way while I am in [city]. So it would be great honour to be able to work in a research environment and academic environment under the supervision of eminent scientist like you.
(That is too general and quite unimpressive. Flattery is not generally well accepted in scientific communities. Does the person you are writing to have a PhD? )


I am eager to gain new experience by working with other mathematicians, physicists and computer scientists who are ... , improve my skills, and expand my understanding of linearly implicit methods, and a PhD project in this area can be quite effective (Effective for what? Why is it effective? be specific. ). I strongly believe that my academic background and my deep concern in this field of research (You have not explained why you are concerned about this particular subject.) have made make me a perfect candidate. very good applicant to do this program in the best possible way and I will be able to meet and even exceed your expectations. After completing the PhD, I intend to pursue a postdoc in Numerical Analysis.

I hope this letter provides insight into my commitment to continuing my education by working on a project with practical applications. to my learning.

Thank you so much for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,

Mari Mi
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Dear teacher,
Thank you for correct my letter.

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Dear Prof. Eric Gill,

I would like to express my interest in the PhD position in "Linearly implicit methods for simulation" in the AH research center, in [city] , In [country].

I am particularly eager to apply for this PhD position, because it is consistent with my academic background and my interests. The first and most important driver that motivates me to apply for this doctoral program is my study and experience in numerical analysis.
As well as, numerical analysis finds in other areas such as all fields of engineering and the physics sciences, which piqued my interest and I decided to focus to continue my studies in this area.

While studying for my BSc in Mathematics Education at the *** University in [country], I took a course in Numerical Analysis, and I learned several methods such as Fixed point and Newton method, for solving nonlinear equations, and interpolation, which aroused my interest in studying in this field. Thereafter, I was admitted to the*** University, [city] branch, for my MSc in Applied Mathematics- Numerical Analysis. Since I found a strong interest in numerical simulation and numerical approximation of the solution of problems in other fields, especially in physics, I have done my Master's project in physics. My master's thesis under the supervision of Dr. Rab, was on "Using mathematical techniques for solving Fokker-Planck equations", which is a partial differential equation appearing in as pring-mass model of energy-harvester with one degree of freedom. Furthermore, I took courses such as Advanced Numerical Analysis (I), Numerical Methods for Ordinary Differential Equations, and Numerical Solution for Integral Equations, with excellent points (17, 18, 20), and learned Rung-kuta methods, Euler method and convergence of them, Finite Difference method, which are prerequisites and directly related to your project on linearly implicit methods, so I am confident that I have the prerequisite background and make significant contributions to your project.

I am eager to gain new experience by working with other mathematicians, and expand my understanding, and a PhD project in this area can be quite effective. I strongly believe that my academic background and my deep concern in this field of research make me a perfect condidate. After completing the PhD, I intend to pursue a postdoc in Numerical Analysis.

I hope this letter provides insight into my commitment to continuing my education by working on a project with practical applications.

Thank you so much for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,

Mari Mi