I'm a first year college student. Unlike other students, they have to move away from home and live and study independently. Finding out an ideal accommodation for yourself can be very difficult. It's so convinient because my school is near my house. The house is quite large and comfortable. It has 3 floors and a terrace roof. There is a garden between the garage and the house. My mother aslo make a terrace vegetable garden on the roof top. That makes the house more green. The house has enough room for our daily activities. There are 8 rooms in the house: one living room, one TV room, one kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Despite living with my parents but I don't rely on them. I can take care of myself. The family support is a strong advantage to me, helps me alleviate difficulties, especially that freshman year.

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I'm a first year college student. Unlike other students, they (Who are "they"?) have to move away from home and live and study independently. (This sentence is a non-sequitur. It has no relation to your first sentence about your being a first-year student.) Finding out an ideal accommodation for yourself can be very difficult. It's so convinient because my school is near my house. (This sentence is another non-sequitur. What does your school being near your house have to do with the difficulties of finding an ideal place to live?)) The house is quite large and comfortable. It has 3 floors and a terrace roof. There is a garden between the garage and the house. My mother aslo make (wrong form, wrong word) a terrace vegetable garden on the roof top. That makes the house more green. The house has enough room for our daily activities. There are 8 eight rooms in the house: one living room, one TV room, one kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Despite living with my parents but (But is a coordinating conjunction. Use it to join two main clauses. ) .I don't rely on them. I can take care of myself. The family support is a strong advantage for to me, (comma splice error, missing word) helps me alleviate difficulties, especially that in my freshman year.

My friend house, if I go in very big hall, three bedroom on left side, dining room and kitchen is on right side and end of there is house balcony. In living room has sofa opposite TV set, one coffee table is there. My friend bedroom has one bed near to window, one study table, beside is book shelf.
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My friend house , if I go in has a very big hallway, and three bedrooms on the left side, while the dining room and kitchen is are on the right side. and At the end of there is the house is a balcony. In The living room has a sofa opposite the TV set, and one coffee table is there too. My friend's bedroom has one bed near to the window, one study table beside which is a bookshelf.

My house is very beautiful and big which has a living room, a sitting room, a kitchen, one master bedroom with attached bathroom, another bedroom without bathroom and dining hall. Moreover there is a big all in the middle of the house which consists of a big green carpet, thirty two inches television, convenient sofas and many flower pots.