I'm a first year college student. Unlike other students, they have to move away from home and live and study independently. Finding out an ideal accommodation for yourself can be very difficult. It's so convinient because my school is near my house. The house is quite large and comfortable. It has 3 floors and a terrace roof. There is a garden between the garage and the house. My mother aslo make a terrace vegetable garden on the roof top. That makes the house more green. The house has enough room for our daily activities. There are 8 rooms in the house: one living room, one TV room, one kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Despite living with my parents but I don't rely on them. I can take care of myself. The family support is a strong advantage to me, helps me alleviate difficulties, especially that freshman year.
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I'm a first year college student. Unlike other students, they (Who are "they"?) have to move away from home and live and study independently. (This sentence is a non-sequitur. It has no relation to your first sentence about your being a first-year student.) Finding out an ideal accommodation for yourself can be very difficult. It's so convinient because my school is near my house. (This sentence is another non-sequitur. What does your school being near your house have to do with the difficulties of finding an ideal place to live?)) The house is quite large and comfortable. It has 3 floors and a terrace roof. There is a garden between the garage and the house. My mother aslo make (wrong form, wrong word) a terrace vegetable garden on the roof top. That makes the house more green. The house has enough room for our daily activities. There are 8 eight rooms in the house: one living room, one TV room, one kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. Despite living with my parents but (But is a coordinating conjunction. Use it to join two main clauses. ) .I don't rely on them. I can take care of myself. The family support is a strong advantage for to me, (comma splice error, missing word) helps me alleviate difficulties, especially that in my freshman year.
My friend house , if I go in has a very big hallway, and three bedrooms on the left side, while the dining room and kitchen is are on the right side. and At the end of there is the house is a balcony. In The living room has a sofa opposite the TV set, and one coffee table is there too. My friend's bedroom has one bed near to the window, one study table beside which is a bookshelf.
My favorite friend, Hadeel, has four qualities. First, always help me when I need something. Secondly, she love listening to me. I also love to listen to her. Third, she is very nice and beautiful, and she always visits me every time. If we come watch a movie or dance. And fifth we have the same talent drawing. To sum up, she is her best friend and best friend I met her
My favorite friend, Hadeel, has four qualities. First, always help me when I need something. Secondly, she love listening to me. I also love to listen to her. Third, she is very nice and beautiful, and she always visits me every time. If we come watch a movie or dance. And fifth we have the same talent drawing. To sum up, she is her best friend and best friend I met her
hello My name Is Inas
I live in house .It oujda city
my house there are 5bedroom and garage and ....................
In the bathroom there are bed ......
My home is located in new delhi on arya samaj street.
I live in a magnificent house as you enter you will see an elegant formal living room. Attached to which is our stylish and chic family dining room. I have three graceful and fancy bedrooms with the master bath on one side and the other two bedrooms on the opposite side of the house
There are curtains throughout the house.
The entire house is painted in a light cream tint bringing in the required brightness and airness. "
I share my house with three more members besides me. My loving mom and my motivating father and my younger sibling. They are the sole reason of my being