It is a common beliefe that developing technology will bring drawbacks to environmet. howerver, there is a more persuasive argument that technology is a key to solve the environmental problems as they help people save money, time and employees in treating polluted problems

on the one hand, some individuals think that as technology become more and more popular, they may inflict damage on ecosystems. To be more specific, people have cut down a milion hecta of forest to build factories. This has led to emission of greenhouse gases. Futhermore, wasted substance from argriculture such as chemical ferterlisers or weedkillers which directly pour in the water also kill a tremendous amount of spiece under water. Take Vidan company as an example. In the year 2010, Vidan company was fined because they exhausted wasted in Dong Nai river. This led to death of many spieces of fish and affect seriouly to health of populators

on the other hand, i support the idea that technology support people to tackle the environmental problems. this is mainly because, people may treat wasted subtance simplier, saver and more effetive with advanced technology. to be more specific, the computerized machine may solve a large amount of rubbish at a short time as well as protect peple from exposuring to etoxic. Moreover, advanced technilogy may be also applied in finding a new power. As shown that, the unrenewable energy has been exhausted, thus using a renewable power plays a pivotal role in developing mordern society. With technology, people can use sun or wind being eco-friendly ,as a power

To sum up, while it is apparent that people need to limit using technology to protect environment, it is undeniable that technology is a best way to tackle to environmental problems

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It is a common [ 1] belief that developing technology technological advancements will bring drawbacks to the environment. However, there is a more persuasive argument that technology is a key to solve the environmental problems as they it helps people save money, time and employees labour in treating polluted tackling the problems caused by pollution.

On the one hand, some individuals think that as technology has become more and more widespread, popular, they it may inflict damage on ecosystems. To be more specific, people have cut down a millions of hectares of forest to build factories or for industrial farming. This has led to increasing emissions of greenhouse gases. Furthermore, wasted waste substances from agriculture such as runoff from chemical fertilisers or weedkillers which directly pour in the local waterways also kill a tremendous amount of fish and other species. spiece under water. Take Vidan, a major company in Vietnam, as an example. In the year 2010, Vidan company was fined because they exhausted illegally dumped large amounts of waste wasted in the Dong Nai river. This led to the death of many spieces types of fish and affect seriously to threatened the health of populators populations of various aquatic species.

On the other hand, I support the idea that technology support enables people to tackle the environmental problems. This is mainly because people may treat wasted subtance waste products simplier, saver and more effectively and efficiently effetive with advanced technology. [ 2] to be more specific, In particular, the computerized machine may solve mechanized and automated systems can process a large amount of rubbish at in a short time, as well as and thereby protect people from exposuring exposure to toxic substances. etoxic. Moreover, advanced technology may be also applied in is crucial to finding new sources of power. As shown that, the unrenewable energy has been exhausted, It is a fact that fossil fuels will eventually be exhausted; thus using renewable power plays a will be pivotal role in developing to sustainability in modern society. With technology, people can use sun solar or wind being eco-friendly ,as a power as eco-friendly sources of energy.

To sum up, [ 3] while it is apparent that people need to limit using technology can contribute to protect environmental problems such as deforestation and pollution, it is undeniable that developments in technology are vital in reducing pollution and promoting the production of renewable energy. is a best way to tackle to environmental problems

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