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Today I wake up at 5.30 am. I brush my teeth and wash my face within 5 minutes. I go to the gym and do boxing. It's first day I wake up early. The weather is very cold because It's winter in Norther Vietnam. It's perfect day, I have many energy. I'm feel happy and funny. My colleague give me a black coffe, no sugar, no milk. It's make me high and working so funny. He's so cute. Now I go to home for lunch. My mother cooked lunch and reserved to me. Tks mom. Emotion: big smile

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A diary keeps a record of the thighs you did that day.
You need to be aware of tenses, because these activities are all in the past. You need to fix the yellow highlighted text. The bold red text are corrections.


Today I wake woke up at 5.30 am. I brushed my teeth and washed my face for within 5 minutes. I go to the gym and do boxing. It's This is the first day I have woken wake up early. The weather is very cold because it's winter in Norther Vietnam. It was a perfect day, I have many energy. I'm feel happy and funny. My colleague give me a cup of black coffe, no sugar, no milk. It's make me high and working so funny. He's so cute. Now I go to home for lunch. My mother cooked lunch and reserved to saved it for me. Tks mom