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At the present, education is seen as the main key for the development of most of nations in the world. There are several types of studying like studying at university/college or joining training career course and in those cases, studying abroad is popular youngster’s choice. Besides the advantage that studying abroad carries, it also has certainly drawbacks. This given essay I will prove this statement.

On the one hand, the main advantage abroad is that they have opportunities for a better future. For an instance, the young have a chance to learn a new language and use it in their job competently. They can also learn … lots of new knowledge about culture and society of the new country. Those things help they earn a higher income in their future job. Furthermore, when studying in another country, students will witness the dramatic changing in their economy and in term of technology, moreover they can enjoy a high living standard. For example, education and healthcare services are the most merit experience thing in most of European countries. Students will be sponsored or receive certain welfare that native countries give for international students.

On the other hand, there are several downsides to studying abroad. First and foremost, staring to have new language back student’s hand might take a lot of time. hence, language barrier and the different in lifestyle and culture can easily make people feel shock and alone when they live in new country. Secondly, homesickness are always appear in their mind, they might get worse emotion although they can keep in touch with their relatives by using social network. Thirdly studying abroad is often expensive owing to the expenditure for accommodation or some expenses their life when moving to another country.

In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned about that including the benefits and drawbacks to develop and challenge themselves when people have a chance to study abroad.

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Discuss about the advantage and disadvantage of studying abroad

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At the present, education is seen as the main key for the development of most of nations in the world. There are several types of studying ways to become educated, like studying at university/college (informal punctuation. Do not use the slash character in formal essays.) or joining training career course and in those cases, studying abroad is a popular youngster’s (wrong word) choice. Besides the advantages (Isn't there more than one?) that studying abroad carries, it also has certainly drawbacks. This given essay I will prove this statement.

Never mention your essay. You already have your thesis statement. Nothing else is needed.


On the one hand, the main advantage abroad is that they (who? There is no antecedent noun.) have opportunities for a better future. For an instance, the young have a chance to learn a new language and use it in their job competently. They can also learn … lots of new knowledge things about the culture and society of the new country where they are living.. Those things help they (wrong form) earn a higher income in their future job. Furthermore, when studying in another country, students will witness the dramatic changing in their economy (I do not understand this. There is no relationship between the home country's economy and the international students.) and in term of technology, (That does not make sense.) moreover they can enjoy a high living standard. For example, education and healthcare services are the most merit experience thing (That does not make sense.) in most of European countries. Students will be sponsored or receive certain welfare (wrong word) scholarships that native (wrong word) countries give to for international students.

On the other hand, there are several downsides to studying abroad. First and foremost, staring (wrong word) to have new language back student’s hand (That does not make sense.) might take a lot of time. hence, the language barrier and the difference in lifestyle and culture can easily make people feel shocked and alone lonely when they live in a new country. Secondly, Second, they make feel homesickness are always appear in their mind, and they might get depressed even though worse emotion although they can keep in touch with their relatives by using a social network. Thirdly Third, studying abroad is often expensive owing to the expenditure for higher cost of accommodation or some expenses their life (That does not make sense.) when moving to another country.

In conclusion, for these reasons I have mentioned about (That does not make sense.) that including the there are both benefits and drawbacks in studying abroad. to develop and challenge themselves when people have a chance to study abroad.


Youngsters are children younger than teenagers. Otherwise, the word is quite informal, like teasing a person who is 100 years old..