It is considered that the benefits of having English as an international language exceed the drawbacks. Personally, I believe that the pros of this trend have more significance than its cons and this will continue in the coming years.
First of all, one of the most advantages of having English as a global language is that it will reduce the gap between the countries as there is no communication barrier. As a result, worldwide trade such as the importing and exporting of goods will increase and benefit the growth of economics around the globe. Moreover, English helps people travel all around the world without difficulties. Many tourists find it hard to communicate with the native people for their simple needs such as asking directions, ordering food,..These issues will be solved with international language. That’s why the advantages of having English as a global language make up for the disadvantages.
Secondly, the benefits of having this language will support people access to progressive education for higher studies. English is known as a passport to help people integrate into the new world. Speaking a common language in a foreign country helps humans in easily adapting in a new environment, as you can relatively easily make friends, learn about the culture, find a job, visit places. For instance, when you have an IELTS certificate, you can apply for a scholarship in foreign country, there are no obstacles to gain knowledge. Thus, pros of considering English as an international language keep you satisfied the cons of this.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that with a worldwide language, the benefits compensate for the drawbacks. Language is an integral part of the culture and it is what links you to it and it is what you pass on to your future generation.
Please do not put the essay instructions in the topic heading. Put them in the message body with your answer.
Subject: Please review my essay
Message:
Topic: Do the advantages of having English as a global language outweigh the disadvantages?
My answer:
Put your essay here.
Also, post in the Essay Forum, not the Grammar Forum:
https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm
It is considered that the benefits of having English as an international language exceed the drawbacks. Personally, I believe that the pros of this trend (There is no "trend" mentioned in the task.) have more significance than the its cons and this will continue in the coming years.
First of all, one of the most advantages of having English as a global language is that it will reduce the gap (wrong word. What kind of gap do you mean?) chances for misunderstandings and conflict between the countries as there is no communication barrier. (You need to write logically connected ideas. ) As a result, there will be more peaceful interactions. Worldwide trade such as the importing and exporting of goods will increase and benefit the growth of economics around the globe. Moreover, English helps people travel all around the world without difficulties. Many tourists find it hard to communicate with the native local people for their simple needs such as asking directions, ordering food,.. (ungrammatical sequence. Do not use ellipses "..." in formal writing. You did not use it correctly.) These issues difficulties will be solved by having an with international language. That’s (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) why the advantages of having English as a global language make up for the disadvantages.
(Do not repeat the thesis statement in a body paragraph. It belongs in your conclusion.)
Secondly, the benefits of having this language will support people access (wrong form) to progressive higher education for higher studies. (unnatural) English is known as a passport to help people integrate into the new world. (That expression meant the continents of North and South America. It is not logical in this context.) Speaking a common language in a foreign country helps students humans in easily adapting to in a new environment, as you (Wrong pronoun. Do not switch from third to second person. Be consistent.) they can relatively easily make friends, learn about the culture, find a job, visit places. (ungrammatical series. Missing conjunction.) For instance, when you have an IELTS certificate, you can apply for a scholarship in foreign country, there are no obstacles to gain knowledge. Thus, pros of considering English as an international language keep you satisfied the cons of this.
(Do not repeat the thesis statement in a body paragraph. It belongs in your conclusion.)
In conclusion, I strongly believe that with a worldwide language, the benefits compensate for the drawbacks. (You never mentioned a single drawback, so you have not really been successful at this task. Do not go off-topic - Your next sentence is not applicable to the task. You need to summarize your main points instead.) Language is an integral part of the culture and it is what links you to it and it is what you pass on to your future generation.