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Do the IT terms in the passage sound ok? In general, are the text style and grammar fine?

We are committed to provide the best support to our customers. The CompanyX Team recognizes that our work doesn't stop when you purchase one of our products. We want you to have a great experience using our products. That’s why we have worked out the support strategy, which keeps you in touch with us from the moment you purchase the software till you start collecting your profit from using it.

Free 90-day Product Support

During 90 days from the moment you purchase the product, we provide the following services:

- FREE installation

- FREE incorporation of your graphic design

- FREE disabling of the features you might not need

The main reason of free support is simple: we want you to start returning your investment in the shortest time possible. Our assistance will save your time, money, and effort.

Free Product Upgrades

The CompanyX products are continually updated with new features based on our customers’ suggestions and comments. When a new feature is added to the product, we send out a newsletter to you so that you can decide if you need it on your website.

If yes, we will update the minor product version you have for free. In this way we thank you for being our valued customer.

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Hi,

I've made a few suggestions.

Best wishes, Clive

Do the IT terms in the passage sound ok? In general, are the text style and grammar fine?

We are committed to providing the best support to our customers. The CompanyX Team recognizes that our work doesn't stop when you purchase one of our products. We want you to have a great experience using our products. That’s why we have worked out a support strategy which keeps you in touch with us from the moment you purchase the software till you start collecting your profit from using it.

Free 90-day Product Support

During 90 days from the moment you purchase the product, we provide the following services:

- FREE installation

- FREE incorporation of your graphic design

- FREE disabling of the features you might not need

The main reason for free support is simple: we want you to start recouping your investment in the shortest time possible. Our assistance will save your time, money, and effort.

Free Product Upgrades

The CompanyX products are continually updated with new features based on our customers’ suggestions and comments. When a new feature is added to the product, we send out a newsletter to you so that you can decide if you need to add the feature to your website.

If yes, we will update the minor product version you have for free. In this way we thank you for being our valued customer.
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Many thanks.

I learned a new word: to recoup Emotion: smile